a velvete essence.

OMG this is so you, I can see you in every line
Beautiful, flowing, gorgeous and so is the poem
Love and light
Ron xx

I am so glad you could see me within the write... hopefully you're not the only one... lol. It's always hard to try and write for a comp within certain parameters.... So I really appreciate your thoughtful comments, my dear!!
I appreciate the list add and that support, very much 🙏🏻

Sending love from across the pond...
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xo
-S

Mmmm...
Lol... like peanut butter, he says... 😂
I like that!!

Ty so much for reading, the list add and the giggle


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B

You are just that...as beautiful as your poems🌹

(blushes)... You're too kind..
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Ty my dear friend 🙏🏻

Beauty spun into self-affirmation through imagery that is strong and vibrant. Really fine poem of self-exploration.

Xo
John

You're so nice to me, John. I wrote this quickly, this afternoon and have read it a few times since and can't really decide if I like it and if it's accurate in describing me or if I hate it and need to scrap it and start over....lol... it's definitely a challenge to try and describe yourself in 30 words....
 That's for sure.....😁

All my appreciation for the list add here and on all the poems I'm lucky enough to have your insights and comments on, tonight.

Thank you for sharing your remarks and I am happy to read that you liked it.... hopefully I'll agree eventually... hahaha..  

Much love and respect,  
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-Susan

You need to explore your body or your mate can do it for you.  Happy ending is in the works. Keep on writing.

I've explored plenty there, that's for sure.... lol... Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts, Francisco
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Beautifully you. I adore the clarity.  I have a tendency to turn my thoughts into riddles in my poetry.  I'm trying to stop my love affair with complexity because it just stems from insecurity.  It's not coming from a pure place.  This poem is pure.  The first stanza brilliant...that those were the first words you found in the exploration of you is just beautiful.   Also, I love your profile picture.  It is gorgeous!

Have a wonderful day, Blue 💙🤍💙

Ohhh Margo,. You're so amazingly kind. Ty for your comments.

I say don't force anything (as far as being complex) maybe attempt a new style poetically, like a minimalistic poem, just to see how it feels. My first attempts were laughable (still are at times) sometimes I feel that style in my bones other times I need that complexity, too...Yes, my insecurity will always howl from time to time... lol... just an idea...
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My gratitude is all yours, I'm so happy you enjoyed reading, my luv.
Warmest regards ✨ 💫 ✨
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Blue

I agree with Ron ... this is so you ... again the structure ... it has a frame ... a body of its own ... unique ... the flow is spectacular ... short crisp lines ... my catnip ... awesome line breaks ... a little punctuation for emphasis ... the last stanza is simply perfect ... good luck B ...

You're very kind, lovely lady... apologies for the late reply... my aches and pains from my second Covid shot kicked my butt today... I wrote a poem today but in all honesty, after rereading it, I'm not quite sure what my impetus was..... haha.... small price to pay... I hope tomorrow has my stamina returning and these aches subsiding...

I appreciate you taking the time to leave your coveted feedback, LilD. I enter comps with trepidations sometimes, so I appreciate the boost! and well wishes too ;)  
Warmest regards ✨  
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xo

Definitely like this.  Good luck on the competition.

I definitely like your visits, my lovely friend, Remy!
I appreciate the well wishes for the comp that's extremely kind

Love seeing you 🦋
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B

Lovely write ... Bless and love ... ..

Ty my lovely friend... I am so grateful for your visits, taking the time to leave your comments and for the kind list add as well 🙏🏻  
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xo

My lovely friend 🙏🏻 ✨...
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Your words are too precious to me this morning!
Thank you so much, Rian. I wholeheartedly appreciate your thoughtfulness and kind sentiments.

I feel truly lucky to be part of such a giving and supportive community. I am so grateful for you and what you add to my experience here.

Much love and respect,
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B

These confessional pieces give so much insight to the writer's passion and inspiration and yet they also create a mystery.
Excellent write Blue.

I appreciate your thoughts... I wish I was full of exciting intrigue and mystery! Haha... a girl can dream! Thanks for reading, Walter.
You rock!
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B