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Paths Cross
Paths cross
Nobody predicted
On the avenue
Warm April breeze
Meeting you by the river
Pint bottle in a paper bag
Sharing a bench
Your head on my shoulder
Friday as the sun goes down
Soul clinching
As good as it gets
In the mystery of poets
Drawn by forces of love
Nobody predicted
On the avenue
Warm April breeze
Meeting you by the river
Pint bottle in a paper bag
Sharing a bench
Your head on my shoulder
Friday as the sun goes down
Soul clinching
As good as it gets
In the mystery of poets
Drawn by forces of love
Published 10th Apr 2021
Author's Note
Down by the river ....
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10th Apr 2021 3:13am
Dear PS,
I found this very touching and sweet. A lot of romance, kind of made me envision sitting in France. Then I just went all over the place in thought recalling a few good times and I’m much obliged to you for that. Lovely piece. H🌷
I found this very touching and sweet. A lot of romance, kind of made me envision sitting in France. Then I just went all over the place in thought recalling a few good times and I’m much obliged to you for that. Lovely piece. H🌷
10th Apr 2021 3:28am
Thanks H
I've found my romantic voice again
Sharing it
Its not hard when you you're inspired
I am .....
Thx so much H
Adore your comments
2 in one day
Wow
Thanks 😊
I've found my romantic voice again
Sharing it
Its not hard when you you're inspired
I am .....
Thx so much H
Adore your comments
2 in one day
Wow
Thanks 😊
10th Apr 2021 3:39am
10th Apr 2021 3:53am
Romance isn't easy, once you have it though,the words flow....
Thx luv .....
Xxx
Thx luv .....
Xxx
Anonymous
10th Apr 2021 5:33am
This is simple, sweet and beautiful ❤️
10th Apr 2021 12:17pm
10th Apr 2021 9:17am
Unexpected goodness from out of nowhere it seems
Never know where love will pop up
Feeling this one
Never know where love will pop up
Feeling this one
10th Apr 2021 12:19pm
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10th Apr 2021 7:30pm
Yes! I was dating a band member back when this hit and he used to dedicate it to me every time. LOL! Memories!
10th Apr 2021 7:32pm
That's a damn good memory A
I'll bet you were a wild woman back then, maybe you still are ....
BIG LIKE on that
I'll bet you were a wild woman back then, maybe you still are ....
BIG LIKE on that
11th Apr 2021 6:34pm
11th Apr 2021 6:39pm
20th May 2021 11:57pm
It's a sweet and mysterious piece dear Poet, but those two last lines seal it perfectly.
BIG LIKE on this.
BIG LIKE on this.
21st May 2021 00:13am
21st May 2021 00:21am
I'm in tears Poet
you would be proud I'm finally off the meth
I miss my girl
you are blessed to have a beauty in your life
I miss Katja aka Lilith
have you seen her lately?
you would be proud I'm finally off the meth
I miss my girl
you are blessed to have a beauty in your life
I miss Katja aka Lilith
have you seen her lately?
