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facts in self providing.
an inferno-kissed desire
courses throughout every vein
at just your imagining
blistering hot skin
beckons sweat to drip
timid hands,
turn leopardess
to pounce, stroke and circle
where touch was purpose born
and it rages and rages... and rages
sacred velvety lips licked, savoring
Ohh the taste
of purity in ravaged bloom
by a needy and desperate tongue
greedy for more—
so.
much.
more.
than self providing
provides,
a fact
that i prove
night.
after.
lonely.
night.
a scent wafts
circling utterly
stimulating
unabashed need
stirring
a prediction
from the very depths—
her promise
and
soon,
his guarantee.
Author's Note
a l'il musing, pining and a smidgen of hope..
© Blu2021
© Blu2021
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Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 8:12am
Oh my god your hot little leopard. Thats very sexy I hope whoever your intended prey is knows how lucky they are
Great visuals, awesome read, cold shower required
Purrrrrfect start to my day
Love and light
Ron xx
Great visuals, awesome read, cold shower required
Purrrrrfect start to my day
Love and light
Ron xx
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8th Apr 2021 6:26pm
Hahaha 😂
I am all smiles that I had a part of staring your day off with a little bit of a bang! (yes, cheeky!) I adore your comments and hopefully yes, there will be someone out there, eventually ... possibilities increase every day. I appreciate your generous list add and your visits, my luv. My day would pale and it wouldn't be the same without you stopping by!
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹
xo
I am all smiles that I had a part of staring your day off with a little bit of a bang! (yes, cheeky!) I adore your comments and hopefully yes, there will be someone out there, eventually ... possibilities increase every day. I appreciate your generous list add and your visits, my luv. My day would pale and it wouldn't be the same without you stopping by!
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹
xo
Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 8:18am
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8th Apr 2021 9:38pm
Ohh Thank you so much for reading and those lovely comments, Grace! I'm glad you enjoyed ;)
Some sexy is needed once in a while!
🌹
xo
Some sexy is needed once in a while!
🌹
xo
Re. facts in self providing.
Oh dear, Lady Blue,
The passion's build is absolutely breathtaking in this piece. The primal sensual hunger of the stalking leopardess (awesome pic). The animal ecstasy in this passage is palpable,
"blistering hot skin
beckons sweat to drip"🤠💦💦
Mmmmmmmm..."sacred velvety lips licked, savoring" 💋💋
Damn this is passsge elicits divine tingles and constructive stirring🙏
You know how scents turn me on ? Well it's no surpise that I'm over the moon with this passage,
"a scent wafts
circling utterly
stimulating
unabashed need
stirring"
Bravissima Goddess Blue ❤️🌹
The passion's build is absolutely breathtaking in this piece. The primal sensual hunger of the stalking leopardess (awesome pic). The animal ecstasy in this passage is palpable,
"blistering hot skin
beckons sweat to drip"🤠💦💦
Mmmmmmmm..."sacred velvety lips licked, savoring" 💋💋
Damn this is passsge elicits divine tingles and constructive stirring🙏
You know how scents turn me on ? Well it's no surpise that I'm over the moon with this passage,
"a scent wafts
circling utterly
stimulating
unabashed need
stirring"
Bravissima Goddess Blue ❤️🌹
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8th Apr 2021 9:31pm
Your comments are so so amazingly helpful, kind, boosting, lovely, gorgeous, motivating, etc etc etc.... but mostly BB... I VALUE those comments, your thoughts and opinions. This, super self critical Blue, yes, I find your feedback helps to promote my "she needs more gumption" sensibility. I can't thank you enough for what that means and how it feels. I appreciate you, your compliments, the list add and the deep dive into the very heart of my poem. I love your lines chosen and I am smiling ear-to-ear that you found the tingles that I hope and dream of trying to inspire .It's always such a pleasure to see you on my page, BB.
Much love and respect,
xo
🐻 🌹🐇
Much love and respect,
xo
🐻 🌹🐇
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8th Apr 2021 11:10pm
Can't hide those tingles from me...my sensors are acute and rather cute 🧸💞
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8th Apr 2021 11:13pm
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9th Apr 2021 00:04am
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Re: Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 6:22pm
Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 12:07pm
Now this is sensual poetry ... from the kiss of the first line ... it seduced ... building with each line ... like how the early stanzas were longer ... then as the tempo increased the lines became shorter ... crisper ... excellent use of line breaks ... great job with the additional space between the closing lines ... making me hesitate ... linger ... desire ... last line brings the poem home ...
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Ohhh wow, LilD! Your lovely comments have me filled with such excited joy and humble thanks. I really soak up your feedback and it's valuable impact. I feel like when I can make YOU hesitate, lingering in desire..... that I am definitely on the right track. I just loved reading that!! I'm so glad I could evoke those emotions.
I truly appreciate you, your visits, the generous list add and the time you take with me! 🙏
Much love, LilD!
🌹
xoxo
I truly appreciate you, your visits, the generous list add and the time you take with me! 🙏
Much love, LilD!
🌹
xoxo
Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 12:55pm
"The taste of purity in ravaged bloom..." Loved it all but that line made me pause. Great sequence and build.
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8th Apr 2021 7:53pm
Hi there, LV
It's truly lovely seeing you 🦋
You have good taste (pun somewhat intended.. hee hee) as that is my favorite stroke of inspiration, too. I am happy you found pause ;)
Thank you so much, my friend 🙏 I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Much love,
🌹
x
-B
It's truly lovely seeing you 🦋
You have good taste (pun somewhat intended.. hee hee) as that is my favorite stroke of inspiration, too. I am happy you found pause ;)
Thank you so much, my friend 🙏 I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Much love,
🌹
x
-B
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Re: Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 6:21pm
Well that's a response!!!
I am so happy I could elicit a little bit of steam and allow for such vivid imaginations! Yess! Almost as good as a bit of self providing, methinks!
hahaha.. I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, my friend
🌹
xo
-B
I am so happy I could elicit a little bit of steam and allow for such vivid imaginations! Yess! Almost as good as a bit of self providing, methinks!
hahaha.. I thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, my friend
🌹
xo
-B
Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 2:29pm
“Where touch was purpose born”
Hell to the yes, Blue! This is a gorgeous and empowering piece of work. You always knock it over the fence, but this one left the park completely. Mad respect for your skill and your style 💜.
Hell to the yes, Blue! This is a gorgeous and empowering piece of work. You always knock it over the fence, but this one left the park completely. Mad respect for your skill and your style 💜.
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8th Apr 2021 5:11pm
Haha..
I am blushing, Luna!! You just made my day :)
I think this came from being awake too late without enough sleep.... lol... Ohh how the mind will wander! I wholeheartedly thank you for those seriously amazingly kind words, the generous list add and all of your own; utterly jaw dropping submissions that I have been lucky enough to get to read daily this NaPo month to date. To me, nothing motivates and inspires, quite like reading others who blow my mind with their talent. I thank so very much for that, my friend 🙏
(I've missed commenting on some of your posts but I read and just adore every single one!)
I am so appreciative and grateful for you and and all your thoughtfulness, Luna ☺
Good luck going forward in your NaPo adventure!
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
B
I am blushing, Luna!! You just made my day :)
I think this came from being awake too late without enough sleep.... lol... Ohh how the mind will wander! I wholeheartedly thank you for those seriously amazingly kind words, the generous list add and all of your own; utterly jaw dropping submissions that I have been lucky enough to get to read daily this NaPo month to date. To me, nothing motivates and inspires, quite like reading others who blow my mind with their talent. I thank so very much for that, my friend 🙏
(I've missed commenting on some of your posts but I read and just adore every single one!)
I am so appreciative and grateful for you and and all your thoughtfulness, Luna ☺
Good luck going forward in your NaPo adventure!
Warmest regards,
🌹
xo
B
Re. facts in self providing.
8th Apr 2021 3:50pm
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8th Apr 2021 6:17pm
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8th Apr 2021 9:13pm
Hey there Tim, Nice seeing you 🦋
(where's the avatar?)
I would like to read that poem of yours if it's still around?? ☺
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, my friend. I am glad you can feel the emotions that I try to convey, that's my goal! To be thought of as compelling is a wonderful compliment. Thank you for for the RL add and your insightful comments. I can count on your openness and it's always so refreshing and welcomed.
I hope you're doing well, Tim
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
(where's the avatar?)
I would like to read that poem of yours if it's still around?? ☺
I appreciate your thoughtful comments, my friend. I am glad you can feel the emotions that I try to convey, that's my goal! To be thought of as compelling is a wonderful compliment. Thank you for for the RL add and your insightful comments. I can count on your openness and it's always so refreshing and welcomed.
I hope you're doing well, Tim
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
-B
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8th Apr 2021 9:17pm
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8th Apr 2021 9:20pm
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8th Apr 2021 11:13pm
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9th Apr 2021 1:38am
Re. facts in self providing.
9th Apr 2021 4:18am
Wow Blue, edge of my seat. I like the way you spaced and slowed down near the end.
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9th Apr 2021 4:45am
Hey there Remy ;)
I really loved your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed reading, my friend.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. It's a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
B
I really loved your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed reading, my friend.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. It's a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
B
Re. facts in self providing.
9th Apr 2021 7:00am
You be greedy and go after what you want , which is great ass sex. Keep on writing.
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9th Apr 2021 12:10pm
C'mon Francisco, be nice!!... lol.... I will be greedy, but what I want may still be a mystery! Ty for reading.
Re. facts in self providing.
10th Apr 2021 2:28am
This takes sexual being into the realm of spiritual climax. Loved the soft flow here and where it took me. There is eroticism here but so much more. And I felt the sensual bliss as it unfolded through your brilliant evocation.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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10th Apr 2021 4:13am
Ooolala... this was definitely a bit O' sexy mixed with a nuance of my deeper feelings. You, catching that is definitely an astute observation. I am so appreciative and grateful for your sentiments and insights. Thank you for the RL add and for being with me on my several different roads traveled.
All the best wishes from across the ether,
🌹
xo
Susan
All the best wishes from across the ether,
🌹
xo
Susan