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deep seated.
to end up
just like her
discarded
bitter
and
alone.
just like her
discarded
bitter
and
alone.
Published 29th Mar 2021
Author's Note
for Grace's Fear comp
© Blu2021
© Blu2021
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29th Mar 2021 8:30am
Never gonna happen beautiful you are far to lovely to ho to waste, somewhere in the universe Mr Rights thinking the same as you. Have faith he will find you, if he hasn't already and you just don't know it....yet
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
Love and light gorgeous
Ron xx
29th Mar 2021 9:24am
29th Mar 2021 11:00am
29th Mar 2021 5:55pm
I love your feedback.... alas, always a bridesmaid.... hahaha... it's ok though, if I had to pick a winner I'd pick Colin, too!! .... 😂
Thank you kindly, my dear!
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xo
Thank you kindly, my dear!
🌹
xo
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
29th Mar 2021 12:02pm
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29th Mar 2021 5:59pm
Yes, sad and a bit fear-filled, it was for a comp.... more of a fear of turning into vibe... was my intent.
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts ;)
Much love,
🌹
xo
29th Mar 2021 1:37pm
29th Mar 2021 6:03pm
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
29th Mar 2021 1:40pm
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29th Mar 2021 6:02pm
lol...
Ty, Ru.
I wrote it for the Fear competition, so hopefully that's what I conveyed.... a biggest fear!
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend 🙏
🖤 🥀 🖤
x
Ty, Ru.
I wrote it for the Fear competition, so hopefully that's what I conveyed.... a biggest fear!
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts, my friend 🙏
🖤 🥀 🖤
x
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Jul 2022 4:45pm
29th Mar 2021 7:53pm
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29th Mar 2021 7:54pm
Thanks.
Intended, as it was for a competition
... appreciate your thoughtful comment
Nice seeing you 🦋
x
Intended, as it was for a competition
... appreciate your thoughtful comment
Nice seeing you 🦋
x
30th Mar 2021 00:42am
30th Mar 2021 4:12am
That's a truly wonderful thing to read about one's self, Francisco... Ty very much
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30th Mar 2021 2:27am
30th Mar 2021 4:11am
30th Mar 2021 3:19am
Depressing. But then sometimes, as they say, it is best to be alone than be with the wrong ''other''.
30th Mar 2021 4:06am
30th Mar 2021 4:29pm
How sweet you are to write a tribute piece...for little old me! Lol, ok, I read the comments. That is the nightmare though, isn't it, for us...perfectly sparce and perfectly stated!
hahaha...
Perfección!
Ty, Margo
gratitude for the generous list add
🙏
🌹
xo
Perfección!
Ty, Margo
gratitude for the generous list add
🙏
🌹
xo
31st Mar 2021 1:05am
Succinct and dynamite comes in small packages. Superbly written my friend.
Xo
John
Xo
John
2nd Apr 2021 8:49pm
2nd Apr 2021 9:00pm
Ty for reading, love.
and the list add
... agreed and I'm appreciative of your compliment, very much so.
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x
and the list add
... agreed and I'm appreciative of your compliment, very much so.
🌹
x
12th Apr 2021 5:40pm
That is a deep seated fear for sure. Heavy message in brief verse.
Excellent work Blue.
Excellent work Blue.
12th Apr 2021 6:22pm
