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incandescent in burnt moonlight
Interrupted
hours
or minutes, it seems
a sweat covered body
of a thorny figure
rages of moonlight
and twists of stoked fire
wondrous
"rite of passage"
how uniquely
bound
maybe relegated
to this life's
similar beckon
or shades
the pasture air is cool
skin pricks alive
with welcomed synthesis
forces in heroic
like a sublimation of desire
where even
the mist
through
out turned hands
can permeate
becoming a legacy of acceptance
a version of it
or a self created monolith
mysticism that lies in wait
dazzling in potential
a reclamation
of pure knowledge
to be found
in all that
her legacies have entrusted
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 15th Mar 2021
| Edited 16th Mar 2021
Author's Note
© Blu2021
a long night of tossing and turning...
a long night of tossing and turning...
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 2:08pm
Thank you, James. I appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts
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xo
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xo
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 3:31pm
Beautiful memories..........when spiritual memories are no longer bound to linear time (IMHO)
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
Ty for reading and leaving your thoughtful sentiments, my lovely friend. I'm extremely appreciative of you... Today started harsh and I haven't been able to shake off a hit to my psyche, causing me to be down on myself, so your lovely visit has helped me this afternoon—more than I realized until now.
Ty Ty!
I really needed it I guess ☺
Much love and goodness your way...
🌹
xo
Ty Ty!
I really needed it I guess ☺
Much love and goodness your way...
🌹
xo
Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 3:57pm
i have a way of intruding on Friends' lives
when their heart (spirit) is in need of a booster shot
Delighted i listened to my intuition this morning!!
when their heart (spirit) is in need of a booster shot
Delighted i listened to my intuition this morning!!
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
Your delight is my souls welcomed delivery from a wee bit of torment.. Ty for being the Ying to my Yang today.... and balancing me :)
💜
xoxo
💜
xoxo
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 3:54pm
Beautiful, Lady Blue ❣️❣️ I identify with this piece. Almost every morning I wake to find sheets and blankets on the floor so restless was my sleep. These lines to me are very sensual, perhaps a succumbing to self-pleasure, those much needed, centering experiences of passion,
"rages of moonlight
and twists of stoked fire"
We both live in hot, humid climates so I empathize with that "sweat covered body" and especially after engaging in the experience I described above.
I just really love this phrase,
"becoming a legacy of acceptance
a version of it"
It makes me feel whole...a personal acceptance of my being
Brava, Goddess BB 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
"rages of moonlight
and twists of stoked fire"
We both live in hot, humid climates so I empathize with that "sweat covered body" and especially after engaging in the experience I described above.
I just really love this phrase,
"becoming a legacy of acceptance
a version of it"
It makes me feel whole...a personal acceptance of my being
Brava, Goddess BB 🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Hey there, BB! 🐻 🌹
I adore your beautifully thoughtful remarks, my friend. You're always so very open and honest with your feedback. I couldn't be happier than I am that you identify with some of what I was able to convey. Our caliber of character and a personal acceptance is key... imo... Here's to living in hot humid climates.... uggghh... whew 💦 💦 💦..lol
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your kindness, the generosity of your RL add and just the warmth extended.....
Always such a pleasure!
Much love your way.
🌹
xo
I adore your beautifully thoughtful remarks, my friend. You're always so very open and honest with your feedback. I couldn't be happier than I am that you identify with some of what I was able to convey. Our caliber of character and a personal acceptance is key... imo... Here's to living in hot humid climates.... uggghh... whew 💦 💦 💦..lol
I appreciate you taking the time to leave your kindness, the generosity of your RL add and just the warmth extended.....
Always such a pleasure!
Much love your way.
🌹
xo
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
Susan this write is an inspiration!
You remind me that we do not need monuments (great metaphor) to be representative of our legacies.
We are empowered by our spirituality of not letting our worst days be how our lives are defined.
Our true legacy is our character.
It is how we love, respect, and treat others.
That is how we will always long to be remembered by those who come after us.
. And to be quite honest you have the added bonus of writing your legacy every day, lol
...ps. Lord knows I can think of better ways tossing and turning you all night, hahahaha.
Sleep well tonight , hugZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
Amazing Write!
You remind me that we do not need monuments (great metaphor) to be representative of our legacies.
We are empowered by our spirituality of not letting our worst days be how our lives are defined.
Our true legacy is our character.
It is how we love, respect, and treat others.
That is how we will always long to be remembered by those who come after us.
. And to be quite honest you have the added bonus of writing your legacy every day, lol
...ps. Lord knows I can think of better ways tossing and turning you all night, hahahaha.
Sleep well tonight , hugZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!
Amazing Write!
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 7:42pm
Thank you for delving deep within my little poem, Ron. I'm really appreciative of your take away after reading. The notion of one's own character and a sort of legacy in how we treat each other, has definitely been on my mind recently. There's something to be said for taking responsibility, being up front and just plain kind to people.... just my random thoughts...
I hope I can sleep much better without assistance... heh heh heh... too...lol 😈 💤 🌙 🌙
I appreciate all your loveliness, my friend
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xo
I hope I can sleep much better without assistance... heh heh heh... too...lol 😈 💤 🌙 🌙
I appreciate all your loveliness, my friend
🌹
xo
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 5:44pm
In the heat of night beneath the moonlight. A shadow stokes the heat of desire on satin sheets...whispering.
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 6:14pm
Your comments are pure poetry, Adagio.
That whisper became a call to action of sorts, only alleviated by pouring out my mind's eye onto the page... I thank you for reading and leaving such beautifully kind words, my friend. ✨
Your insights are valuable and mean a lot to me.
I appreciate you -
🌹
xo
That whisper became a call to action of sorts, only alleviated by pouring out my mind's eye onto the page... I thank you for reading and leaving such beautifully kind words, my friend. ✨
Your insights are valuable and mean a lot to me.
I appreciate you -
🌹
xo
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 8:13pm
I love the depth woven throughout this ... flow is impeccable ... line breaks sustain the cadence ... great from start to finish ... last stanza is the perfect closing ...
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 9:58pm
Ty so much for sharing your kind words, LilD.
I can't thank you enough for how valuable your insights are to me - feedback that I use to reflect upon and course correct if need be, to improve my writing. I appreciate it so very much and I feel lucky to have you visit 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
I can't thank you enough for how valuable your insights are to me - feedback that I use to reflect upon and course correct if need be, to improve my writing. I appreciate it so very much and I feel lucky to have you visit 🙏
Much love,
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
15th Mar 2021 10:20pm
Rian,
I do believe that too, about people's paths having crossed once they'll more than likely cross again. It's a belief that's hopeful that I invest my heart into as well. Your comments made me smile and reflective. I thank you so much for reading and leaving those precious thoughts behind.
I'm so grateful for you and you're always welcome here
🌹
Much love your way 🙏
xoxo
Susan
I do believe that too, about people's paths having crossed once they'll more than likely cross again. It's a belief that's hopeful that I invest my heart into as well. Your comments made me smile and reflective. I thank you so much for reading and leaving those precious thoughts behind.
I'm so grateful for you and you're always welcome here
🌹
Much love your way 🙏
xoxo
Susan
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
16th Mar 2021 2:58am
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16th Mar 2021 3:34am
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16th Mar 2021 9:51am
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
16th Mar 2021 8:46am
Lovely felt write ... With you ... was not a good night or day, or yesterday lol bless and much love ... .
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
16th Mar 2021 9:55am
My dearest FeNyX.... How I wish I could help you with having better days and nights ahead... Hopefully you're able to get a small reprieve by reading and losing yourself amidst DU for a bit... 🙏✨🌟💫.... I'm sending out healing vibes your way and all the love I can muster ... Ty so much for reading and your thoughtful comments....
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xo
-B
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xo
-B
Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
20th Mar 2021 2:05am
You always leave your reader swooning with completely awe and wonder.
Excellent spill dear Blue.
Excellent spill dear Blue.
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Re: Re. incandescent in burnt moonlight
20th Mar 2021 4:00am
Thank you for such a beautiful sentiment, Wally. I really appreciate that deeply. I am humbled, and grateful for your visit.
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xo
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xo