Essence

I really missed seeing you, AP and it's wonderful to be have you back, publishing :)  
This tanka is really beautiful, my friend  
🌹  
💜

Lovely write ... Bless and love ... ..

then i did my job

Amazing write.

i will agree its good
not quite sure amazing
but then i always
think that

Don't we always.  The never ending struggle of accepting one's own beautiful work.

Luscious

BIG LIKE

i try my best

when (we) You forget to breathe,
what happens when She holds Her breath?

Then i (we) are in a wee bit trouble  

Brother!!!!
Where have You been pining!?? (hiding?)

This is really nice.

A very pretty write on the impact of love

This is so impactful ... sweeping ... in its brevity ...