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Senryu
Unheard
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Unheard
unheard whispers of
a soft murmuring heartbeat
saying i love you
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
6th Mar 2021
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#love
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LilDragonFly
6th Mar 2021 11:43am
Nice ... crisp ... tragic ...
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PoetSpeak
6th Mar 2021 1:05pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2021 6:00pm
6th Mar 2021 1:07pm
Wow... Ohhh my... it's just so succinctly, perfect ... the ache... the unrequited love...
You are, a senryś sensei.
🙇♀️
I love it so.
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buddhakitty
6th Mar 2021 7:12pm
Short, soft and sweet. Well done.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Tallen
(earth_empath)
6th Mar 2021 9:13pm
shshshshsh............
keeping (our) courage
at bay prevents possible
future hurt.
Still..............
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faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
7th Mar 2021 6:16pm
Beautiful...just beautiful ❤️
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Anonymous
2nd Apr 2021 9:01pm
Achingly beautiful
Gwen
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SweetOblivion
18th May 2021 2:17pm
sweet w/o being cloying
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