tenderize.

Dear Lady Blue, to me this reads like a diary entry of a truly tortured soul. I can almost physically feel, "Driving deep the throes of her truest pain"
This description of dawn is absolutely beautiful, "the sky lightens—  
streak'd  
of
cornflower blue"
Bravissima Goddess BB❣❣

You're so very insightful BB... I usually don't write outside of DU but instead I write here and then I'll copy to word once I'm done writing to keep a personal copy, too... this time I quickly wrote this while working, on my note taking app. I am not in love with it but I am having a hard time focusing and creating and this is what came out. So, I am extremely appreciative of your thoughtful comments, my dear....and I thank you for taking the time and effort you so beautifully do.  
Much love and respect,
🌹🐻💋🌹
xo

Bless and love ...

Thank you for reading and the list add, my dearest FeNyX.... you are very kind, my friend. I hope you are doing well and I am very happy to see you upon my page ☺
Much love your way
✨
🌹
xo

I am grateful for you eyes upon my page and your thoughtful comments make me smile wide, RiAN. I am so thankful for you and the light you bestow!
Much love
.. and returned positivity your way, my friend 🙏
🌹
xo
-Susan

My mind is in the gutter, because I wish you would tenderize, LOL.  Love and lust are in the air right now between us.  Keep on writing.

Ty for reading, Francisco... no gutter here, (not this morning anyway.. lol) only my insecurities, mental health issues and a small amount of hope on a horizon out there. I appreciate your readership  
🌹

Sweetheart this is so sad.
I hope this isn't how my sweetest poetess feels
Sending all my vibes across the pond
Love and light
Ron xx

Awww, my SS... I'm ok. I just need to purge sometimes, too. We all do, it's good for us.
I adore you and I'm extremely appreciative of the list add and your thoughtful comments, too
I feel your vibes, and I wholeheartedly Ty 🙏
Much love returned
🌹
xo

I loved your poem, deep and fantastically written, what I loved the most about it was its presentation. I love the free fall
experience of your word expression in visual form. Short sentences seem to keep the reader ready to read the next,
line, instead of a new sentence and line, as I'm typing out now, which might bore and overwhelm, and drive away an audience.
   Well, I am new to this style,
and I will be experimenting with it,
because I love it. and because I do not know the name of this style,
I will call it '
'FREEFALL STYLE'
unless you want to tell me what it actually is........
I'm listening.......
No?
That's cool...
I'll wait...I'll wait....
Until then

(this is not to be construed as an example of FREEFALL STYLE)

Hi Archie :)
I really appreciate your time and the list add for this little write of mine....I myself, wasn't thrilled with it (I am such a harsh self critic) but like you, I enjoyed the formatting as well...

I don't know what to call it either, I just cut the lines where I felt the words needed the most punch and where I knew they needed highlighting, especially when choosing the text format of "center" alignment .. it makes more of an impact (center alignment, in this format) - I'm my mind's eye, anyway. I also shortened the lines to look more aesthetically pleasing to me too, when read this way, which I find helps with the flow engagement. (like you alluded to) Hopefully I explained that in a way that's understandable, as I can certainly drone on... ;)
Once again, I'm thankful for your visit 🙏
Much love,
🌹
-B

It's the spark that lights the fire of imagination... imo... Ty so much for stopping by, reading and leaving your thoughts, my friend 🙏  I'm so appreciative and always happy as a clam to see you. ;)
🌹
xo

I like this.  Felt the emotion.  

Ty for reading and leaving your thoughts, Remy
🌹

Ohhh my, I humbly thank you ... as are you,
my dear.
🌹
xo

this spill found my eyes wet and leaking......
damn

i love how You use Homonyms and both meanings of the word apply!

Spills like this from You often cause me to believe all "subs" like us feel this tortured way everyday.....
i know i do, but because my 1st (& only true) Domme died
i can't image what it must be like when one's Dom / Domme is still living.

Awwww... Tallen! (hugs)
Ty for sharing your amazing and heartfelt reactions. I didn't want tears but I'm so very glad you and I are connected as we are.
You are a wonderful and kind soul, my friend. I thank you for reading and your extremely thoughtful remarks... I appreciate you, greatly.
Much love,
🌹
xo

There was something to this format that made feel it sympathetic and relatable.
As always Blue you have a knack for conveying these emotions so well.
Great work.