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Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
a rancourous rage
steeps of pure steadfast intent
doubles down shared pain
Author's Note
March Senryu Theme: hostility
via the Haiku pond.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/4815/
© Blu2021
via the Haiku pond.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/4815/
© Blu2021
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 6:11pm
I will need to read this a few times to let it marinate. Ive really been enjoying your short pieces!
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:08am
Hi Eerie
I really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you are enjoying the little bits.. lol 😁
I do love them!
Thank you
🌹
xo
I really appreciate your comments and I'm glad you are enjoying the little bits.. lol 😁
I do love them!
Thank you
🌹
xo
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 6:32pm
"rancorous," a sapiosexual satiator❣️❣️ Dear Lady Blue, you've delivered 17 syllables of TKO punch 🥊💥💫
🐻💋🐻💋🐻
🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:11am
🥊 Pow! 💪🏻🥊
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments, GW
I'm a fan of the language too! :)
Regards,
-B
Ty for reading and your thoughtful comments, GW
I'm a fan of the language too! :)
Regards,
-B
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 7:12pm
Rage is always within us. We find ways to release the rage without hurting anyone. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:12am
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 9:07pm
Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:11am
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2021 9:40pm
This could of course apply to so many different situations and I love that that is our gift as the reader. Ive always found these little pieces and their stripped back approach enticing and insightful :)
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:20am
Hi there, Missy :)
I agree with you, the reader having the gift of defining meaning... ambiguity is like catnip to me. I adore when a poem's meaning varies from person to person and they derive from it what's most meaningful to them.
Thank you for reading I'm so glad you stopped by
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
I agree with you, the reader having the gift of defining meaning... ambiguity is like catnip to me. I adore when a poem's meaning varies from person to person and they derive from it what's most meaningful to them.
Thank you for reading I'm so glad you stopped by
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 9:44pm
Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:23am
Yes, poetic sushi 🍥!!
I love that, LilD
Ty so much for reading, the list add and just killing it with that comment ;)
🌹
xo
I love that, LilD
Ty so much for reading, the list add and just killing it with that comment ;)
🌹
xo
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 11:36pm
Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
2nd Mar 2021 11:46pm
Hee hee hee... only due to the senryś of the month theme! You're ok.. I promise, Leo!
🙏
xo
;)
🙏
xo
;)
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 2:50am
crushed it with first five (5)
mad verse strikes with next seven (7)
climactic last five (5)
...senryu kisaki!!
mad verse strikes with next seven (7)
climactic last five (5)
...senryu kisaki!!
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 6:22am
You're so very kind, Ron
and I'm still giggling!
hahaha 😂
I appreciate you.
🌹
xo
and I'm still giggling!
hahaha 😂
I appreciate you.
🌹
xo
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 5:27am
Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 5:31am
That's awfully nice, Remy ;)
Thank you so much for reading!
I'm glad you enjoy my work and I hope you continue to read... and create
💜
xoxo
B
Thank you so much for reading!
I'm glad you enjoy my work and I hope you continue to read... and create
💜
xoxo
B
Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 11:53pm
Another A++ from your creative mind. You always amaze me. Thanks, hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral
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Re: Re. Hostility (a senryś) ~ an endless endgame
3rd Mar 2021 11:58pm
Likewise, you amaze me too...;)
Ty for reading and leaving your footprints here.
I truly love your visits, more than you know...
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and leaving your footprints here.
I truly love your visits, more than you know...
🌹
xo
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4th Mar 2021 00:01am
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4th Mar 2021 00:02am
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