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Vicarious
If you wanted to be cut
I could do that for you
It's because of the trust
If I surrendered to the whip
I'd want it to be you
Because of the trust
I never envisioned these thoughts
I can now
Trust
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Re. Vicarious
28th Feb 2021 10:32pm
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28th Feb 2021 11:06pm
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28th Feb 2021 11:27pm
Re. Vicarious
28th Feb 2021 11:51pm
That kind of trust is hard earned. But oh so spectacular once you're there.
Love this.
Love this.
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1st Mar 2021 00:38am
Re. Vicarious
1st Mar 2021 1:51am
And the safe word is...? All kidding aside, the underlying tone of connection is superb. Well done, PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. Vicarious
1st Mar 2021 4:21am
T ransformation to Bond with another
R ewards with believing in another
U nyielding confidence in another
S ecured sexuality in another
T enacious relationships thrive
...the cuffs are off with this Master-ful confessional.
BIG LIKE BROTHER!
R ewards with believing in another
U nyielding confidence in another
S ecured sexuality in another
T enacious relationships thrive
...the cuffs are off with this Master-ful confessional.
BIG LIKE BROTHER!
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Re: Re. Vicarious
1st Mar 2021 4:29am
YES
It's all possible because of the Trust
It's a remarkable journey, miraculous even
Thx for the SC
Street Cred
Means so much to me
RL too
It's all possible because of the Trust
It's a remarkable journey, miraculous even
Thx for the SC
Street Cred
Means so much to me
RL too
Re. Vicarious
1st Mar 2021 4:20pm
That first stanza is very meaningful to me. Sometimes you want to be cut, to feel that blood as it leaves the vein and it takes you away somewhere else or it just keeps you there feeling nothing else. Allowing someone else to do it for you is an incredible level of trust. The second stanza beautifully illustrates how that level of trust is only accomplished if both share it. Regaining that ability trust after it was lost is truly difficult; to get through those protective barriers built through suffering - it is one of the hardest things...
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Beautiful thoughts and expression, Abstraction in real life ....
Thank you
Beautiful thoughts and expression, Abstraction in real life ....
Thank you
Re. Vicarious
6th Mar 2021 2:29am
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6th Mar 2021 3:23am
Out on the wing of solitude and play ....
Entering a red zone .....
Thank you Sir
Entering a red zone .....
Thank you Sir