Senryu - Quintet

Felt the thaw as I read it, good glimpsy picture from first meeting to the lovemaking. Particularly like this verse:

Splash of pearl-white seed
two parts nectar of goddess
coital cocktail blend

Thank you very much, Solomon! The verse you particularly like was actually the seed verse. I started there and then got the 5 senses idea.

Seed verse LOL - very apt.

This is great.
I keep reading it again and again.
Thank you
Richard

Thank you so much, Richard! I am pleased that you like the piece  enough to want to read it repeatedly...that's high praise and every poets aspiration.

Sexy, steamy and erotic... wow! No wonder why it's getting warmer where you are, BB! 🐻 💋 🐻 ... Daaaamn!
This definitely caught my eye and pulled me in. What cleverly used sensual, lustful, and power packed 17 syllable little gems.....lol. I'm a sucker for the sexy af senryú. Some of my favorites, they are. If you keep these going, it'll be spring blossoming there before you know it... hahaha 😂
Thank you for sharing,
Much love,
🌹
xo

Dearest, Blue
I think a little bit of Spring blossomed as I read your titillating comment. As always, I am over the Moon that my humble verse brought you a modicum of pleasure. I know this is teenage boyish but modicum makes me feel smart and sexy 🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻

Sure warmed me up ... thanks GW ...

Knowing that I have warmed you, dear Soledad, with my verse sends me a walk'n on clouds 💞 Merci beacoup mon jolie amie❣️❣️

Wonderful!

That single word gave me tingles head-to-toe. I am so pleased that you like this piece, Viktoria. I appreciate very much the read and your kind word of encouragement.❣️❣️

Great! Senryu is my favorite poetic form. I've been calling my senryu groups 'strands'. 'Quintet' sounds much more...poetic.

I am truly honored, Kinkpoet, that you enjoy this piece. I like strand. I only chose quintet to represent the five senryu just as I call my three-parters triptych. I know, technically, they are untitled. The Haiku/Senryu style is one of my favorites as well.  

Well this is an awesome stringing together of Senryu to make something truly awesome. Seduction, kissing, touch, scent, sounds, vibration, moans, and you sure did tie it up beautifully there at the end. That coital cocktail blend is the best. Be careful you don't burn someone with your quill * cough * lol.... that means try to burn it to the ground, don't worry the fluids keep things at the right temp...

Kristina, i am thrilled that you like this piece. I'll have to write more like it just to get more of your titillating comments. You're so in touch with your sensuality. That's a gift. 🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻