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tempting a supernova.
expanding outward
towards
outer space
twisting in
pure ecstatic
anguish
nuclear
heat builds
and
builds
sweat
drops
s
l
i
d
e
piercing
an inner sanctum
to ripe fusion
molten core
to glistening
such mighty power
steeped—
deep
of
heavy matter
o' to devour
a pure
angelic
entity
finale reveals
a secret majesty
ripple'd savory
ardent waves
an epic universal
force
penetrating
then
collapsing
b u r s t i n g f o r t h
IN EXPLOSION
an exquisite supernova.
Published 18th Feb 2021
Author's Note
a little playtime w/fonts and metaphors... ;)
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18th Feb 2021 5:41am
The are various writers on this site that are able to play with their poetry's format. We just happen not to be one, so we're incredibly impressed when anyone does it. The adjectives though many aid in the piece instead of taking from it. It places a reader right there in a booth with a pocket full of tokens, Hahaha, tight work Boo
18th Feb 2021 2:07pm
haha..
I love your comments, Me
Ty so much for you words of wisdom ;)
I'm so thankful for you...
🌹
xo
I love your comments, Me
Ty so much for you words of wisdom ;)
I'm so thankful for you...
🌹
xo
18th Feb 2021 2:08pm
haha 😂...
I've not reached it yet, but I'm searching..
Ty for sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹
I've not reached it yet, but I'm searching..
Ty for sharing your thoughts, Francisco!
🌹
18th Feb 2021 8:09am
Now thats a orgasm
Great write, a tension building read, awesome climax
Love and light
Ron xx
Great write, a tension building read, awesome climax
Love and light
Ron xx
18th Feb 2021 2:05pm
18th Feb 2021 8:45am
'finale reveals a secret majesty' - Love this ... Nicely done ... Bless and love ... .
18th Feb 2021 2:05pm
Dearest FeNyX,
Ty so much for your honesty remarks. I feel the love and I'm extremely grateful
Much love returned,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
Ty so much for your honesty remarks. I feel the love and I'm extremely grateful
Much love returned,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
18th Feb 2021 9:04am
18th Feb 2021 2:03pm
Thx archie
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
🌹
B
I appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts.
🌹
B
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18th Feb 2021 7:38pm
🇺🇸 💙 😁 🇬🇧
Ty, Wilber
I'm so glad to have you stop by and I'm tickled that you enjoyed reading ;) appreciate your lovely comments 👍🏻
Much love from across the pond <3
🌹
xo
B
Ty, Wilber
I'm so glad to have you stop by and I'm tickled that you enjoyed reading ;) appreciate your lovely comments 👍🏻
Much love from across the pond <3
🌹
xo
B
18th Feb 2021 9:48pm
18th Feb 2021 10:00pm
19th Feb 2021 2:11am
Erotic and tantalizing blue.
"piercing
an inner sanctum
to ripe fusion" that was pretty intense.
Excellent work!
"piercing
an inner sanctum
to ripe fusion" that was pretty intense.
Excellent work!
19th Feb 2021 2:16am
Ty Walter!
just messing around a bit .. hahaha 😂
I'm feeling kinda uninspired lately.
Always appreciate you reading and taking time.
🌹
xo
B
just messing around a bit .. hahaha 😂
I'm feeling kinda uninspired lately.
Always appreciate you reading and taking time.
🌹
xo
B
Anonymous
24th Feb 2021 9:03am
I have added this to my reading list :) Great job,Bluevelvete
5th Aug 2021 9:16pm
The volcano can relate. Molten core, pressure building - release needed. Exploding out the top. Hot lava everywhere.
😉🌋🏃♀️
😉🌋🏃♀️
6th Aug 2021 3:33pm
It's truly entertaining that you pick one of the poems of mine that I like the very least.... haha.... I was surprised that I still had this one published and not hidden or deleted...
I am so delighted by your volcanized (yes, I made that up) musing, Leo. 🌋
Temptress that I am, (sometimes) I do enjoy a good eruption of hot lava, every now and then!!
🔥 🌶 😋
Thank you for the giggle and the smiles, my dear.
🌹 - B
I am so delighted by your volcanized (yes, I made that up) musing, Leo. 🌋
Temptress that I am, (sometimes) I do enjoy a good eruption of hot lava, every now and then!!
🔥 🌶 😋
Thank you for the giggle and the smiles, my dear.
🌹 - B
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2022 6:09am
I would be wearing some hi test sun glasses were i ever to witness a supernova of you. your poetry and carnal beauty gloriously sprawling though the darkness of the heavens. a rapturous light that would shine daylight on the entirety of the earth below with your talented pen
