Evensong...

just beautifully composed  

Thank you so much, D. It's good to see a welcome face. Uber Pandy hugs!💙

Stunning piece, just beautiful
Love and light
Ron xx

Better late than never , so thank you...
💖 & ✨ to you as well, Ron

"Meet me at midnight, with honeyed wishes on your lips,
and sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams throughout your veins."

And *this* was but the beginning of your rendering
of poetic beauty , and the engagement of souls !

Well done , yet is that not your norm of expression ?

I have missed your words...

I'm leaving a late thank you here in case you return.😉 The comment was wonderful.

Grabbed me from the start. This is what poetry is all about. Don't stray from your style.  

A very overdue thank you for such a lovely comment.

Gorgeous writing Pandy! It is so nice to see you back! you have definitely been missed.

Thank you , beautiful one. 🌸✨💗

Beautiful, Pandy ... You always have a way of capturing and elevating ... Love to prayer ... Bless and love ...

This is such a wonderful comment to see. (Hope)fully I can get it back, but my style has changed on me over the years. I no longer feel like Pandy. 😔

Favourite lines, for romanticism:

With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars;

Thank you Solomon. There was a moon and sun theme going on at that time.

Gorgeous metaphors are woven in the deep river song of a woman who knows the pulse of her amour. This sings me with the tonality of a songbird in passion. The profundity of your passion washes into me like a sweet Jamaican surf that puts me into the reverie I needed tonight.

XoXoXo
John

Better a late thank you than never, John. So glad you enjoyed it. I hope to write like this again.

What a nice comeback .  As l steel the sunshine from your lips with a kiss .  xx

Yearning loving read. Favourite lines (evoking the passionate kiss):

As I steal the sunshine from your kiss, I'll swirl nocturnes 'round your tongue, breathing fresh life and the psalms of my eternal love into your lungs.
With fingers laced like constellations,
lose yourself in my jewels of blue, as they pierce like shooting stars; [beautiful metaphor for the eyes]

Miss you xx

Miss you too, lovely one. Hugs. 🫶🌸✨

I love the imagery your words painted. It's so sweet and full of genuine love. We could all use such tenderness in our lives. Nicely written, my dear.

Thank you ever kindly my fellow S and moon lover. 💖✨

This piece of writing is beautifully crafted, evoking a sense of longing, intimacy, and the anticipation of a celestial meeting. The imagery is vivid and rich, drawing the reader into a world of nocturnal romance and ethereal connections.

The use of metaphors such as "sanguine rivers pulsing Elysian dreams" and "fingers laced like constellations" adds layers of depth and mystique to the language, creating a dreamlike atmosphere. The contrast between darkness and light, night and day, is woven throughout the text, reflecting the complexities of desire and the yearning for union.

Overall, it's a captivating and poetic portrayal of love and longing, leaving the reader with a sense of enchantment and a desire to explore the depths of such profound connections.

I'm literally speechless and can't thank you enough for such a wonderful review. ✨