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intuitive sounds of silence.
hear.
me.
as weary
ears
listen
with
a certain
built in
intuition
even with
that scoff,
it's there,
just focus
in
and listen
hear.
me.
with each
curve
of your
goosebump
pebbled
skin
it's me
speaking
shhhh....
yes,
Yes
you can
my voice,
is it heard?
by your
heart's
saving grace
a sound,
permanently
imprinted
with my
specific
tender
cadence
a timbre
of your
very own
cherished
sense memory
cradled in
your psyche's
recesses—
so
deeply
I now possess it
Our sound of
silence
sings
a dark
hello
is whispered
in
brilliant
illumination
as
our sung music
s l o w s,
in dreamlike
recognition
...then drifts
to
gently fleeting...
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 4th Feb 2021
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©Blu2020
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Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 3:37pm
Very stoic I do hope your finding your way back . The trifle type members here have no ground here
They are jealous of your talent believe that mama!
We love you Blueboo!♥️
Love always
Your sis
Jackie 🌹
They are jealous of your talent believe that mama!
We love you Blueboo!♥️
Love always
Your sis
Jackie 🌹
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Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
Your comments, support and encouragement are priceless and very much appreciated, Jackie.
Ty for reading and adding to your list, it's generous and not taken for granted.
Much love and respect,
💞🌹💞
xo
-BB
Ty for reading and adding to your list, it's generous and not taken for granted.
Much love and respect,
💞🌹💞
xo
-BB
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 4:44pm
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4th Feb 2021 4:46pm
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 6:04pm
Dear Blue, this piece brings me piece. It evokes memories of the many remembered voices that keep alive memories of sugnificant people in our lives. I was touched most by this passage,
"with my
specific
tender
cadence"
Bravissima Goddess Blue❣❣
"with my
specific
tender
cadence"
Bravissima Goddess Blue❣❣
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Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
Dear BB,
Your comments also bring me peace and joy.
Ty for sharing your thoughts, I'm grateful for your visit, today
;)
xoxo
Your comments also bring me peace and joy.
Ty for sharing your thoughts, I'm grateful for your visit, today
;)
xoxo
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 6:56pm
BV your elegant inspiration in poetry has me speechless with this write. (hmmmm perfect title you got with this gem, lol)
Your beautiful verse of silence plays a song of empathy and wisdom gained and attained with each refrain of silence. ( you even inspired a little rhyme, haha)
Your words are the notes and your expressive poetry the beautiful music.
Melodious Masterpiece!
Your beautiful verse of silence plays a song of empathy and wisdom gained and attained with each refrain of silence. ( you even inspired a little rhyme, haha)
Your words are the notes and your expressive poetry the beautiful music.
Melodious Masterpiece!
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Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
FF,
Seeing your comments makes for an INSTANT SMILE! It's just how it is!!! I love how your mind's eye goes to 'song of empathy' , isn't that just me!!
It so is... Bingo! I'm always so amazed that you can drill down so accurately, so well done, FF.. Impressive!
;) I thank you for the generous list add in addition to taking the time to comment today...
I'm grateful for you!
-in kindness,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Seeing your comments makes for an INSTANT SMILE! It's just how it is!!! I love how your mind's eye goes to 'song of empathy' , isn't that just me!!
It so is... Bingo! I'm always so amazed that you can drill down so accurately, so well done, FF.. Impressive!
;) I thank you for the generous list add in addition to taking the time to comment today...
I'm grateful for you!
-in kindness,
🌹 💜 🌹
xoxo
B
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
Since is golden when you are listening to your woman speak. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 10:32pm
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4th Feb 2021 11:17pm
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4th Feb 2021 11:18pm
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 8:56pm
The picture and poem have created another masterpiece by you dear lady.WOW! It could be a song, too. Sing to me. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral
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Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 10:33pm
I would love to sing to you... it's a favorite ;)
Ty dear, O.... love seeing you here!
🌹
xo
Ty dear, O.... love seeing you here!
🌹
xo
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
4th Feb 2021 9:32pm
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4th Feb 2021 10:37pm
Dearest FeNyX, your presence upon my page is a validation of sorts (no pressure ever!) that I'm doing 'something' correctly... I am LOVING your descriptor... Ty for sharing and coming to see me today, much love and returned blessings..
🌹
xo
B
🌹
xo
B
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
5th Feb 2021 6:03am
Dear BV,
This poem was a lovely lullaby. Gentle, peaceful, read at a lento or adagio tempo it lowered the blood pressure and soothed the soul. It’s a pretty piece that can play over and over and never lose its impact. Very much appreciated and just the ticket for a hectic day.I really don’t know how you do it? Home runs with every write.
H🌷
This poem was a lovely lullaby. Gentle, peaceful, read at a lento or adagio tempo it lowered the blood pressure and soothed the soul. It’s a pretty piece that can play over and over and never lose its impact. Very much appreciated and just the ticket for a hectic day.I really don’t know how you do it? Home runs with every write.
H🌷
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Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
6th Feb 2021 2:51am
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6th Feb 2021 2:52am
Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
14th Feb 2021 3:46am
It's a very palpable piece, weaving softly through each line.
My favorite:
"a timbre
of your
very own
cherished
sense memory "
Nicely done Blue.
My favorite:
"a timbre
of your
very own
cherished
sense memory "
Nicely done Blue.
1
Re: Re. intuitive sounds of silence.
14th Feb 2021 4:02am
You're so kind, Walter
My smiles are many and I'm extremely grateful
Ty, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
glad you enjoyed those lines...
My smiles are many and I'm extremely grateful
Ty, my lovely friend
🌹
xo
glad you enjoyed those lines...