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We fell in love,
We fell so hard,
Then silence grew a graph
Two parallel lines, apart.
Jollylush
Written by Jollylush (Amora)
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- Edited 18th Nov 2021 8:45pm
4th Feb 2021 12:41pm
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(Amora)
4th Feb 2021 3:52pm
Thank you for reading. Much appreciation. 💕
Jollylush
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4th Feb 2021 6:49pm
17 words that expressed volumes. Great poem. Hugs and peace,oral
TheOralizer
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(Amora)
4th Feb 2021 6:51pm
Oh I didn't count the words before.
Thank you for reading , much love.💌
Jollylush
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4th Feb 2021 8:29pm
Look forward to more great poems. Hugs and peace, oral
TheOralizer
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5th Feb 2021 5:48pm
I like this. I was just thinking how deep parallels could go. Makes me wonder.
adagio
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(Amora)
7th Feb 2021 5:03pm
Glad you liked it. Much thanks for reading ❣️
Jollylush

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