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Source of my pain
It is a furnace inside I ran outside...
I am freezing while being outside..
Seizing of my breathe..
An ice house while am outside..
I sighted a funeral just far away..
Guess I am going out of my range..
In my whole life I've never been this cold..
Come and get me.. mama!
All I need is your comfort..
Put me in shape..
I need only your guidance..
Source of my pain..
Is not the source of my gain..
All I need is aiming..
I still rotate..
In this I find solace..
I see me a chance..
Even in no man's land..
I am freezing while being outside..
Seizing of my breathe..
An ice house while am outside..
I sighted a funeral just far away..
Guess I am going out of my range..
In my whole life I've never been this cold..
Come and get me.. mama!
All I need is your comfort..
Put me in shape..
I need only your guidance..
Source of my pain..
Is not the source of my gain..
All I need is aiming..
I still rotate..
In this I find solace..
I see me a chance..
Even in no man's land..
Published 3rd Feb 2021
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4th Feb 2021 5:08pm
4th Feb 2021 7:57pm
You don't have to say anything..
You are the Broom, remember?..
Sweep me up darling..
Good evening..
You are the Broom, remember?..
Sweep me up darling..
Good evening..
5th Feb 2021 7:29pm
I love that glimmer of hope in "I still rotate"...
You drew me in with the title and kept me riveted, Numer
Ty for sharing
🌹
xo
B
You drew me in with the title and kept me riveted, Numer
Ty for sharing
🌹
xo
B
5th Feb 2021 7:50pm
6th Feb 2021 12:37pm
I like the existential imagery your poem conjures up; a stimulating read. Best regards, Josh.
6th Feb 2021 1:04pm
