If I was some of you

What if I was you?
I would be reading this about someone's overview.
I say to could have done this or said that;
I would have wrote it in a different format. 
You made a miztake you spelled it wrong;
Why would you say that: that don't belong. 
Why didn't you punctuate  that verse;
You could have spent more time; at least rehearse. 
Look man that makes no sense;
"fallen up on a broken fence!"
Why were you thinking when you wrote this shit;
You dumb ass dont you have any wit. 
You could have been stronger at this part;
You should have spoke from the mind and not the heart. 
What point were you trying to make;
For you to write was a big mistake

I spent a lot of time reading some comments;
To reply like this; you have no common sense. 
To tear apart emotions that one has felt;
It would bruise and even leave a welt. 
You can't critique ones true life's tail;
For that truly is an epic fail!

Some comments are sweet and long; no one has the right to tell you what you feel is wrong. 
So don't be so quick;
To become a bad critique. 

This was wrote because I have seen some bad comments on DUP. Saying what the feel is wrong; to your feelings are stupid. I know that their is ALWAYS someone better, but if "I was the best: it would not leave any room for improvement."