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Our love story
You are my love story,
and I write you into everything I do,
everything I see,
everything I touch and
everything I dream,
you are the words that fill my pages
with my desires
with my hopes
with my love
nothing will fulfil me until
we
are
together
at
last.
and I write you into everything I do,
everything I see,
everything I touch and
everything I dream,
you are the words that fill my pages
with my desires
with my hopes
with my love
nothing will fulfil me until
we
are
together
at
last.
Author's Note
We have grown our love since finding each other online but we are still waiting to be together for the first time due to this virus.
I have had it and am now clear but she was positive a week. ago so we wait more to be finally together
I have had it and am now clear but she was positive a week. ago so we wait more to be finally together
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Re. Our love story
25th Jan 2021 11:11am
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25th Jan 2021 12:03pm
Thank you for your comment and yes my love really appreciates that I write from the heart
Re. Our love story
8th Feb 2021 6:57am
Re: Re. Our love story
8th Feb 2021 7:15am
Hi Lj
There should be movement on our situation this week as several things are looking to be sorted so that we can take the next step in our lives to ensure our lives will be closer.
I will message you with any news unless I can publish something positive
Richard
There should be movement on our situation this week as several things are looking to be sorted so that we can take the next step in our lives to ensure our lives will be closer.
I will message you with any news unless I can publish something positive
Richard
Re. Our love story
15th Feb 2021 4:26pm
Really beautiful words... "I write you into everything I do,..." That anticipation and longing really tries the patience... but I hope you are together soon!
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Re: Re. Our love story
15th Feb 2021 5:13pm
Thank you Kristina
The story refuses to unfold yet as she has tested positive again. three tests in a row.
Now she is depressed and little wonder so I will write her another poem now to try and lift her spirits.
Richard
The story refuses to unfold yet as she has tested positive again. three tests in a row.
Now she is depressed and little wonder so I will write her another poem now to try and lift her spirits.
Richard
Re: Re. Our love story
15th Feb 2021 5:15pm
I am really sorry to hear she continues to test positive, that's hard. I am sure you writing for her will help lift her spirits though. And just make it even more incredible when you do meet.
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Re. Our love story
22nd Feb 2021 9:28am
Wow Richard, I just read your interaction with Kristina. I am sad to know that your love has tested positive with COVID, I assume. To echo Kristina's comments, your use of "everything" so well illustrates the depth of your devotion.
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Re: Re. Our love story
22nd Feb 2021 9:38am
Thanks Gahddess.
If people can feel the devotion I have for my love I know I am on the right track to becoming a writer.
She tested last week for a third time and still positive which is giving her problems of stress, anxiety and emotional disruption and I am now distressed that I cannot be with her as together I know we will be able to overcome all of this.
If people can feel the devotion I have for my love I know I am on the right track to becoming a writer.
She tested last week for a third time and still positive which is giving her problems of stress, anxiety and emotional disruption and I am now distressed that I cannot be with her as together I know we will be able to overcome all of this.
Re: Re. Our love story
22nd Feb 2021 11:03am
Are you able to communicate electronically? I know it's a poor substitute for touch but it's better than no contact at all. Stay strong, Richard. I pray she's recovers soon.
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Re: Re. Our love story
22nd Feb 2021 12:18pm
Fortunately we can connect on a google hangout and that gives me hope but so far nothing we have tried has helped us to be together as if COVID was aimed directly at our happiness.
I have an issue with hangouts, Telegram, WhatsApp and the myriad of other platforms - they are all great for people who don't remember how to talk and can only text each other but I know that I can express more in two minutes of talking than twenty minutes of misspelling text messages.
I have an issue with hangouts, Telegram, WhatsApp and the myriad of other platforms - they are all great for people who don't remember how to talk and can only text each other but I know that I can express more in two minutes of talking than twenty minutes of misspelling text messages.
Re: Re. Our love story
22nd Feb 2021 2:18pm
Do a Zoom. You can access on line for free then you can talk via video conference.
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23rd Feb 2021 7:14am
Unfortunately her phone can't take pictures and won't get a video from zoom or any other platform which is a complete shit as that would have been so good for us from the start.
I have very limited pictures of her from her picture gallery but some of those were used by her last shit of a boyfriend who compromised her social media to blackmail her threatening to send them to her family.
When I catch up to him as I fully intend to I will explain to him the error of his ways. I use zoom a lot for networking since way before the virus made it into everyones consciousness so I am hopeful that I get her access to another phone to borrow for us to connect sooner.
I have very limited pictures of her from her picture gallery but some of those were used by her last shit of a boyfriend who compromised her social media to blackmail her threatening to send them to her family.
When I catch up to him as I fully intend to I will explain to him the error of his ways. I use zoom a lot for networking since way before the virus made it into everyones consciousness so I am hopeful that I get her access to another phone to borrow for us to connect sooner.
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22nd Feb 2024 6:25am
Re. Our love story
5th Apr 2024 6:25am
Hello Richard, how are you; since likes are kept anonymous, wanted to let know that liked your write very much, dig it man...
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Re: Re. Our love story
5th Apr 2024 9:13pm
Thank you for your comments
I have a few others that keep in contact through the mail system.
We can talk there as they are private messages and only appear on our personal inboxes.
Use that and we can follow up as these comments can be read by any DUP user.
I'll send you a message
Richard
I have a few others that keep in contact through the mail system.
We can talk there as they are private messages and only appear on our personal inboxes.
Use that and we can follow up as these comments can be read by any DUP user.
I'll send you a message
Richard