Obedient

Touching the bloody stains as I torment your persuasions. I love this.

Thank you Adagio, somehow I knew you would appreciate this one. Why can I imagine you touching the  blood stains as you persuasively torment me. lol Perhaps it is just the darkness in us both mingling... 💀⚰️⛓️

I read "in the mooring she lost consciousness" ...simply one of your best to date...rips the soul wide open 💢

Wow, I am speechless, but I want to say something. lol Best to date, just wow. Thank you so much Tim. I am really happy I could rip your soul open, sounds kind of bad but I like it anyway... I hope I can rip your soul open more in the future. 🩸⚰️⛓️🩸

This piece rolls us between the inquisitions and approaching your turn at the guillotine. You have never felt so freaking alive as your turn. The bloody stripes and all are just the wrapping paper around this present. Tight work again Lady

I can always count on you to join me in the darkness I_IS_ME, the inquisitions and the guillotine; I definitely know where you are coming from with your unique perspective. Definitely you feel so alive there. 'Bloody stripes are the wrapping paper...' - I love that! and I am happy to give you this gift. 🩸⛓️🩸💀

YES! An A+ poem. So on track with suspense, passion, and reality. You have hit a magic lane in your writings. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral

YES! seems very sexual to me. lol Hit a magic lane, again I am speechless... Absolutely love that and I am so happy you joined me in that magic lane. Suspense, passion, and reality - your description is so perfect... As always, thank you for the encouragement. 💀💋⛓️🩸

You make it easy to encourage perfection. Remember,"The best is yet to be." So keep on keeping on. As a line in a song says, "You've got what it takes." So take your poetry on and on. Hugs and peace,  oral

Damn hot poem.   Keep on writing.

Thanks Francisco, I like damn hot. :) 💀💋⛓️🩸

Fire and brimstone  
Zesty personal lust
Unafraid, unflinching  
Complete mayhem and redemption  
Kristinax  
Anti-Khrist  

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SUPERIOR WRITING

The Anti-Khrist letting her virgin succubus out to play and to be tormented in the flames. But she will always be a virgin, always searching for new experiences and redemption wiping away the past in a torturous ocean of dark desires and pleasure. 'Complete mayhem and redemption' is a perfect representation of the thoughts involved in conjuring this one into words. Speechless from the RL add, and you made my morning with the compliment on my writing. I really appreciate it so much. 🩸⛓️🩸💀

Kx your written dark imagery is binding poetry. Great Climax to all the Bloody and bruising metaphors amplifying, ''Virginity Preserved ''! ...a sense of reclamation through the carnage of submitting her mind, body, and soul.... at your mercy with this dark lecherous write. Slayed it!!!!!!

Dark imagery is binding, makes me think of witchcraft and I love witchcraft. 🧹You have captured things perfectly and I cannot imagine a better description than that regarding the 🩸 carnage and reclamation 🩸. You absolutely nailed it. And with you at my mercy there would no doubt be more blood and bruising to go around. lol 🩸⛓️🩸💀

Dear Kristina, you've captured well the visceral nature of these dark and, to me, incomprehensible desire. I pondered most this passage, "She could not endure the blind desire of
Hours spent with someone impersonal"
Brava mon jolie BD 🐻💋🐻💋

This was indeed an attempt to capture that visceral nature of the dark and the desires that hide there in the darkness that most are afraid to confront. That passage could be read literally, basically these acts being done by and with someone who is a stranger; possibly blindfolded. Or in other ways such as being treated as an object and not a person to torment and break, while being steeped in desire for such disregard.  🩸⚰️⛓️🩸

I possibly went in a totally different direction (as per usual) in this write. The opening images actually reminded me of the ancient viking practice of blood-eagling. This was a ritualistic killing in which the flesh was peeled back from the spine and the lungs pulled through the body to lay on the back, like wings. The less you screamed, the more your worth when entering Valhalla.

It was the image of those stripes tying you to the bed that married those two images together for me. In the one hand, lust is emotion. On the other, it is us dying inside the moment so that we may show our worth to our God.

I don’t have a huge amount of time for the erotic category, but I found this piece intriguing in its display of longing beyond the surface level.

Thank you for sharing.

-M

I am familiar with the blood eagle. There are many things buried in this piece like much of my writing; some of which only I would understand. You introduced something I had not thought of specifically which I love. I can certainly see how it applies, the torture and death either physically or mentally and then the new beginning of entering Valhalla; virginity intact. With the blood eagle one must endure a tremendous amount of pain to find that peace. Sometimes it is this way in life. And that is such a great description of lust, I love your unique perspective. Generally if I write erotic it has a deeper meaning rather than simply sex. This one I categorized as dark because much of it derived from dark places and I felt it was more appropriate there. Of course it is deeply erotic as well and definitely that lust and the taboo, and extreme sex, which delves deeply below the surface is a core part of it. I won't try to go into the meanings more but I really loved your comment and perspective so much. 🩸⛓️🩸🩸

This is one of those pieces were the vivid descriptions and lively images set everything on fire, building the anticipation and yet having a sigh a relief at the end. It certainly leaves many of us weak at the knees. Hot and erotic🔥
Excellent work Kristina.

Sometimes you just have to set everything on fire 🔥, burn it all to the ground and build it up again because you are so drawn to the flames and want to burn again... I love leaving you weak at the knees and I should not be the only one to burn. You made me think of 'Burn the witch by Shawn James'. :) I am really happy you liked this erotic stroll into the 🔥 flames 🔥 and darkness. 🩸⚰️⛓️🩸