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Ripped

Ripped

The sorrow, pain and heartache, the day you said goodbye, left me a broke and shattered man, inside i still often cry

For once my life was full of hope, I basked in your loves sunlight and never saw the rain, now I'm soaked right through to heart, I'm full of hurt and pain

Before I was on cloud nine, I knew no such thing as a heartbreak pain, now I'm standing in lifes gutter, with my teardrops running down the drain

My once white and fluffy clouds are now so big and dark, a storm is now hanging over me, your leaving was the spark

Lightning strikes around me, I pray it hits me deep inside my heart, removing the love filled memories, when i thought we'd never part

But they say it's better to have loved and lost and at least in loves pool I dipped, tell that to my broken beating heart, now from my chest its ripped

Ron
Written by averageJoe69 (Ron Summers)
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The heart ripped from the chest
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