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dusk.
time caught in between
daylight mixes aubergine
fading to unseen
Author's Note
my pic.
January Haiku Theme: Dusk
Haiku Pond.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/4725/
©Blu2020
January Haiku Theme: Dusk
Haiku Pond.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/haiku-pond/discussion/4725/
©Blu2020
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Re: Re. dusk.
Re. dusk.
19th Jan 2021 6:18pm
Birds flee to the trees.
Nesting in perfect refuge.
Blue's Dusk, Home Sweet Home!
Nesting in perfect refuge.
Blue's Dusk, Home Sweet Home!
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19th Jan 2021 8:06pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
19th Jan 2021 6:26pm
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19th Jan 2021 8:07pm
Re. dusk.
19th Jan 2021 6:35pm
Re: Re. dusk.
I'm going to fly to Scotland right now to hug you in person for that comment!!!! hahaha
Puhleeeease! ... you KNOW how hard they are for me.... it's only by osmosis (from yours) that I am able to come up with this one...
Ty my friend!
(you kinda made my day...)
💜
xoxo
Puhleeeease! ... you KNOW how hard they are for me.... it's only by osmosis (from yours) that I am able to come up with this one...
Ty my friend!
(you kinda made my day...)
💜
xoxo
Re. dusk.
19th Jan 2021 7:06pm
I learned a new word "aubergine" and it use fits very well within your poem.
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Re: Re. dusk.
19th Jan 2021 7:12pm
I love all shades of purple (my favorite color) and once had my hair dyed a version of aubergine! —it was called passionate aubergine... and I never forgot. ;) Thank you for reading, Leo... I'm so glad you picked up a new word and you felt it's use was worthy! 🙏
-always a welcomed visit
🌹
xo
B
-always a welcomed visit
🌹
xo
B
Re. dusk.
19th Jan 2021 10:38pm
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19th Jan 2021 10:49pm
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20th Jan 2021 11:49am
Re. dusk.
21st Jan 2021 8:10am
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21st Jan 2021 2:49pm
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
1st Feb 2021 3:51am
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Re. dusk.
9th Jun 2021 11:06am
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9th Jun 2021 11:08am
Re. dusk.
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2022 5:40am
you exude class, regardless of how many word you use, its just imbued into you, a quality so many others lack
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Re: Re. dusk.
2nd Sep 2022 5:46am
O'milady 🙇🏻♀️ ... (blushes)
You're a true kindred spirit.
A thousand thank you's and a thousand more.
🌹💙 🖤
You're a true kindred spirit.
A thousand thank you's and a thousand more.
🌹💙 🖤