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She
is in search
of
unconditional love
conditionally
of course
it meets her
conditions
Published 19th Jan 2021
| Edited 20th Jan 2021
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Lucy, Peppermint Patty, Sally or Marcie?
Congrats on meeting the conditions.
Congrats on meeting the conditions.
9th Feb 2021 11:16am
20th Jan 2021 11:43am
9th Feb 2021 11:17am
It's only conditional if you both unconditionally agree. Totally love this offering. Is there any such thing as unconditional love? It depends on personality, on whether you are able to give & take.
P. S, I feel you do not need the 3rd & last stanza as all the information necessary is contained within the first two. Maybe as part of an author's commentary, you could mention it there instead, perhaps?
P. S, I feel you do not need the 3rd & last stanza as all the information necessary is contained within the first two. Maybe as part of an author's commentary, you could mention it there instead, perhaps?
9th Feb 2021 11:24am
"It's only conditional if you both unconditionally agree." # truestory and well I think that encapsulates what I'm trying to say!
Is there any such thing as unconditional love?
You know I really don't think so,
I hear people talk of unconditional love from a pet, umm
I'm not sure a dog will love you if it is abused and unfed?
"on whether you are able to give & take" absolutely agree!
Thank you for the suggestions on those stanzas I'm reviewing them and you have a good point!
I'm so glad you enjoyed enough, to share your thoughts and I am very grateful. Thank you so much.
Pea
Is there any such thing as unconditional love?
You know I really don't think so,
I hear people talk of unconditional love from a pet, umm
I'm not sure a dog will love you if it is abused and unfed?
"on whether you are able to give & take" absolutely agree!
Thank you for the suggestions on those stanzas I'm reviewing them and you have a good point!
I'm so glad you enjoyed enough, to share your thoughts and I am very grateful. Thank you so much.
Pea
2nd May 2021 2:22pm
