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56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)

To understand better my love of this sport and in particular, THIS team :
https://youtu.be/FUcnu5XSeQ8  
  
   
 
from wobbly child,    
chilled to bone in early morning    
repeating and repeating    
determined from smallish right beginning  
the makes of something,    
a glimmer  
transfiguration by choice  
and devoted love    
marshaling that will    
morphing into stunning picturesque
speed of impossible to wicked lightning fast
combined strength of pure brute physical
a solid resolute character now within grasp
skill on the full icy edge of greatness
years of dedication bleeds to
perfect persistence as a plan awaits us
commitment, brethren
and loyalty of a thunderous truth
performance of a lifetime's worth of ready
grit, gumption, attitude
and alpha male of leathered veteran
protecting, battling all in control
a well oiled unit to obtain every goal
joyous in all a committed ardency
as THIS game...

is, a true love story    







Written by Bluevelvete
Published
Author's Note
My second longest love
💙⚡💙
©Blu2020
if possible please watch the video.. it's fucking brilliant and a visual of what I wish I could convey properly myself
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