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56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
To understand better my love of this sport and in particular, THIS team :
https://youtu.be/FUcnu5XSeQ8
from wobbly child,
chilled to bone in early morning
repeating and repeating
determined from smallish right beginning
the makes of something,
a glimmer
transfiguration by choice
and devoted love
marshaling that will
morphing into stunning picturesque
speed of impossible to wicked lightning fast
combined strength of pure brute physical
a solid resolute character now within grasp
skill on the full icy edge of greatness
years of dedication bleeds to
perfect persistence as a plan awaits us
commitment, brethren
and loyalty of a thunderous truth
performance of a lifetime's worth of ready
grit, gumption, attitude
and alpha male of leathered veteran
protecting, battling all in control
a well oiled unit to obtain every goal
joyous in all a committed ardency
as THIS game...
is, a true love story
https://youtu.be/FUcnu5XSeQ8
from wobbly child,
chilled to bone in early morning
repeating and repeating
determined from smallish right beginning
the makes of something,
a glimmer
transfiguration by choice
and devoted love
marshaling that will
morphing into stunning picturesque
speed of impossible to wicked lightning fast
combined strength of pure brute physical
a solid resolute character now within grasp
skill on the full icy edge of greatness
years of dedication bleeds to
perfect persistence as a plan awaits us
commitment, brethren
and loyalty of a thunderous truth
performance of a lifetime's worth of ready
grit, gumption, attitude
and alpha male of leathered veteran
protecting, battling all in control
a well oiled unit to obtain every goal
joyous in all a committed ardency
as THIS game...
is, a true love story
Author's Note
My second longest love
💙⚡💙
İBlu2020
if possible please watch the video.. it's fucking brilliant and a visual of what I wish I could convey properly myself
💙⚡💙
İBlu2020
if possible please watch the video.. it's fucking brilliant and a visual of what I wish I could convey properly myself
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Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 4:25pm
Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
Awwww, My dearest DU friend
Ty for such a kind comment.
I'm just motivated by that video... it was ahhnmazing!! I'm appreciative of the list add and you taking the time to read... watch the video too, it's worth it!
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Ty for such a kind comment.
I'm just motivated by that video... it was ahhnmazing!! I'm appreciative of the list add and you taking the time to read... watch the video too, it's worth it!
🌹
🏒 🏒 🏒
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 5:29pm
Your work glides off the virtual page like WAYNE GRETZKY ( PERSONAL GOD OF MINE ALONG WITH DOMINIk HASEK) on ice
With elegance grace and power. Girl you are sharpshooter of the highest skill. Your words always hit the back of the bet
Love and light
Ron xx
With elegance grace and power. Girl you are sharpshooter of the highest skill. Your words always hit the back of the bet
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
Thank you, Ron
My love of hockey might seem trivial to some, it was a serendipitous uniting and precisely because I DIDN'T like sports really at all that I eventually DID become a huge fan, that now LOVES this sport and this team the most.(confusing, I know.. but true) It's been a lifesaver in the pandemic, for sure.
These players (in normal seasons) play more games than any other sport, by far, to win The Stanley Cup. It's the hardest fought for trophy, in sports, IMO. The training from childhood, commitment and skill it takes from them is utterly jaw dropping. The exhilaration from a live game is sooo much fun and something I miss, terribly.
My point, I was drawn to write this by a force within.... it wrote itself.
Love is like that, sometimes it just takes over and exposes itself to the world,
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
My love of hockey might seem trivial to some, it was a serendipitous uniting and precisely because I DIDN'T like sports really at all that I eventually DID become a huge fan, that now LOVES this sport and this team the most.(confusing, I know.. but true) It's been a lifesaver in the pandemic, for sure.
These players (in normal seasons) play more games than any other sport, by far, to win The Stanley Cup. It's the hardest fought for trophy, in sports, IMO. The training from childhood, commitment and skill it takes from them is utterly jaw dropping. The exhilaration from a live game is sooo much fun and something I miss, terribly.
My point, I was drawn to write this by a force within.... it wrote itself.
Love is like that, sometimes it just takes over and exposes itself to the world,
Much love,
🌹
xo
B
Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 5:56pm
I played net minder in a skater hockey team and then coached a youth team. I adore ice or skater a seriously tough sport
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 5:58pm
It's like we were MEANT to be friends, huh!?!
Star Wars
Kink
Hockey
Poetry
is here anything else in life?!?!?
hahaha 😂
Star Wars
Kink
Hockey
Poetry
is here anything else in life?!?!?
hahaha 😂
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 6:26pm
.....love this game and my Caps!!! Great post!!! BV this is Brilliant!!! ...synonymous to this Quote, ''Winners Never Quit and Quitters Never Play Hockey''. You certainly capture the the essence of the love and dedication to the Game in an incredibly beautiful write!..."LET'S GO CAPS"!!!!
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You've got that right, with the locker room banner saying!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed and found that it resonated. I know it's not a very poetic topic, yet I do love hockey, SO! It's a catharsis and welcomed addition to this 2021, with it's new beginning, there comes new hope!!
Here's to both, The Caps and The Bolts!!!
See you on the ice ❄
;)
🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️
xoxo
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Here's to both, The Caps and The Bolts!!!
See you on the ice ❄
;)
🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️
xoxo
💜
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 9:12pm
Warmed my Canadian heart... 🍁❤🏒 Yeah, those boys work hard.
Everything is poetry fodder! I've written hockey poetry too. Bring it on!
XO
Everything is poetry fodder! I've written hockey poetry too. Bring it on!
XO
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
14th Jan 2021 9:21pm
k.
Thank you for reiterating your love of the best sport ever!! ... lol... (#Truth) I'm glad your Canadian heart finds a friend in FL (most Canadians do!!.. hahaha) and I LOVE the information that you've previously written hockey poems, sooo much!!! I mean love is love, after all... heh heh..
Bring it on, indeed. 👍🏻
🥅🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒
🌹
xo
B
Thank you for reiterating your love of the best sport ever!! ... lol... (#Truth) I'm glad your Canadian heart finds a friend in FL (most Canadians do!!.. hahaha) and I LOVE the information that you've previously written hockey poems, sooo much!!! I mean love is love, after all... heh heh..
Bring it on, indeed. 👍🏻
🥅🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒⛸️🏒
🌹
xo
B
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 1:55am
Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 1:55am
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 3:17am
Blue, excellent poem about excellence. The video is awesome as well. Were you in the crowd?
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 3:20am
I don't have a clue of what shots of the crowds were when? ... it's possible... lol... hahahaha.
Ty for reading and watching!
I'm appreciative of that gesture, B
It means a lot to me!
🌹
xo
Ty for reading and watching!
I'm appreciative of that gesture, B
It means a lot to me!
🌹
xo
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 6:26am
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15th Jan 2021 6:28am
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 11:21pm
Fantastic!!! Very uniques, which is not so unusual for you, talented lady. Hugs, kisses, and peace. Oral
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 11:23pm
hahaha...
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Ty for reading, Oral
I'm grateful for you
very much so...
nose to toes.
xoxo
hugs and kisses
-B
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Ty for reading, Oral
I'm grateful for you
very much so...
nose to toes.
xoxo
hugs and kisses
-B
Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 11:26pm
Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
15th Jan 2021 11:29pm
I would have been seriously disappointed if you didn't.... Mmmm...
I feel them from top to bottom.
hugs, kisses and hugs again
xoxo
I feel them from top to bottom.
hugs, kisses and hugs again
xoxo
Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
16th Jan 2021 2:40am
Big like on this Blue. I'm not sure if there is a difference with sports teams playing without crowds (or however many are being let in to keep social distancing) that the roar from the stands fuels their energy. Like all good teams (talented players and excellent coaches), the chemistry exudes from practice to game time.
Hope you and your team have a great season.
Hope you and your team have a great season.
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Re: Re. 56 dreams to repeated greatness (An ode of ice and grit)
16th Jan 2021 2:42am
I am soooo looking forward to the return to THIS normalcy... It will be so wonderful... lol
Ty for the well wishes!
We just won game 2 tonight! Woo-hoo
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Appreciate the read!
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Ty for the well wishes!
We just won game 2 tonight! Woo-hoo
🏒 🏒 🏒 🏒 i
Appreciate the read!
🌹