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A love affair with words
Often I saunter
into the garden of words
My mind
a frisky butterfly
flitters
flutters
amidst the delicious blossoms
a dalliance
a romance
summoning with their divine dance
tantalizing
titillating
seducing my intellect
Oh,these
flirtatious teases
offering coyly
their sweet nectar
Ah,the elixir
for the heart 'n' soul
of a poetic mind...
into the garden of words
My mind
a frisky butterfly
flitters
flutters
amidst the delicious blossoms
a dalliance
a romance
summoning with their divine dance
tantalizing
titillating
seducing my intellect
Oh,these
flirtatious teases
offering coyly
their sweet nectar
Ah,the elixir
for the heart 'n' soul
of a poetic mind...
Published 13th Jan 2021
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13th Jan 2021 2:05pm
WOW! What an amazing tribute to those of us who are wordsmiths...so true, creating a new desire to be better. Thank you. Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
13th Jan 2021 5:47pm
Hey thank you, dear one for the awesome review... It's always great to read your comments. 😊🌹
13th Jan 2021 5:48pm
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14th Jan 2021 7:07pm
Thank you 🌷 it feels great to see this piece finding a corner in your RL list 😊
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15th Jan 2021 10:33am
One of my favourite quotes is how we should never hike through the mountain — we should saunter, to make sure we take it in reverently rather than as passing and hurried. So I love that the word saunter is in the opening there.
I think the spacing adds a lot of diction to the piece which I really liked about it. It made each thought a separate and concise image and that was really lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I think the spacing adds a lot of diction to the piece which I really liked about it. It made each thought a separate and concise image and that was really lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
15th Jan 2021 8:30pm
That's a beautiful quote...
Oh, I really Like the word 'saunter'... the very sound of this word emanates a sense of calmness... relaxation
Thanks a lot for visiting my page. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts on my poem. 😊🌷
Oh, I really Like the word 'saunter'... the very sound of this word emanates a sense of calmness... relaxation
Thanks a lot for visiting my page. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts on my poem. 😊🌷
15th Jan 2021 8:42pm
15th Jan 2021 8:44pm
Anonymous
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16th Jan 2021 10:09am
16th Jan 2021 2:20pm
Thanks for this great reminder of the power of words, from a beautiful poetic mind. Hugs and peace, oral
19th Jan 2021 1:23pm
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3rd Feb 2021 2:37pm
A very inspiring and needed reminder. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, ral
3rd Feb 2021 7:01pm
And the word love you. Enjoyed the metaphor of the butterfly as a romantic journey.
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9th Feb 2021 4:46pm
There's really nothing I can say.. My butterfly net has a hole in it.. Awesome write
11th Feb 2021 6:19pm
... Let your butterfly flitter about freely :)
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊🌷
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18th Apr 2021 6:09pm
Thank you so much for your kind visit and the RL add. Much appreciated, dear poet 😊🌹
29th Apr 2021 7:55pm
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2nd Jun 2021 2:19pm
Glad this piece appealed to you.
Thanks a lot for dropping by, dear poet. Appreciate your encouraging words. 😊
Thanks a lot for dropping by, dear poet. Appreciate your encouraging words. 😊
3rd Jun 2021 2:44pm
After reading several times it gets better each time, a tribute to your amazing poetic talent. Hugs and peace, oral
3rd Jun 2021 2:48pm
It's very flattering that you have perused it several times... That's really an honour for me.... Thank you 😊🌹😊
6th Jun 2021 2:00pm
Aaahhh yea, this is nice... definitely grateful for that mutual love of poetry spillers 😊✌🏾
6th Jun 2021 2:14pm
Anonymous
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Haha.... Yep, certainly some do
Oh, same here.... Haven't been able to pen down anything for the past few months... My mind seems to have frozen...
Thanks a lot, dear poet for checking out my work... I'm really honoured by the RL adds.... 😊
Oh, same here.... Haven't been able to pen down anything for the past few months... My mind seems to have frozen...
Thanks a lot, dear poet for checking out my work... I'm really honoured by the RL adds.... 😊
28th Jun 2021 3:07pm
I feel the love affair with poetry. I guess that’s why we’re all here. Nice writing!
28th Jun 2021 8:08pm
Yeah.... Love is in the air on dup... 😊
Thank you, dear poet, for stopping by... Very much appreciate it 😊
Thank you, dear poet, for stopping by... Very much appreciate it 😊
29th Jun 2021 7:51pm
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5th Jul 2021 9:46am
Why thank you, dear Tim. 😊 Such nice feedback coming from a poet of high calibre, really means a lot to me. Much thanks 😊🌹
14th Aug 2021 6:07pm
This is great. I feel the same way. Words can be intoxicating 😜
Looking forward to reading more!
Looking forward to reading more!
14th Aug 2021 6:54pm
Yeah, words can be intoxicating :)
Thank you, William for going through my work. I'm very much honoured by the RL add 😊🌷
Thank you, William for going through my work. I'm very much honoured by the RL add 😊🌷
14th Aug 2021 6:59pm
14th Aug 2021 7:39pm
What a beautiful evolutionary ride upon the wind of words elegantly blown like a breeze. Thanks for the ride
14th Aug 2021 7:43pm
Thanks for gracing my page with your beautiful poetic comment. Very much appreciate you stopping by 😊
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Anonymous
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5th Oct 2021 7:50am
Yeah... I completely agree with ya, dear poet.... Words are potent... Cast spell when uttered from the depths of the soul...
And I love your lovely comments.... 😊❤
Thank you so much, dear DW 🌹🌹🌹
And I love your lovely comments.... 😊❤
Thank you so much, dear DW 🌹🌹🌹
2nd Feb 2022 8:21pm
What nature offers and stimulates our mind and fills our heart with sensuality. I reminds me running after the butterflies and try to catch them and they kept dodging me. You re-en kindle those memories.
Hugs,
KS
Hugs,
KS
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4th Apr 2022 7:42pm
Thank you so much graciously.... Very much appreciate you taking your time to read and leave wonderful review. 🌷🌷🌷
