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Can It Be......
I still feel you within my heart
after all this time no answers
am I blessed by with
can it be I’m forever in luv
with you so deeply
beyond luving my own soul
is it possible to give
all that are to another
leaving who you are behind
tell me luv.......do you feel me the same
Copyright © 2021 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
after all this time no answers
am I blessed by with
can it be I’m forever in luv
with you so deeply
beyond luving my own soul
is it possible to give
all that are to another
leaving who you are behind
tell me luv.......do you feel me the same
Copyright © 2021 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 2:04am
Beautiful. Flowergirl❣❣ It's so hard to lose one who has been so integrally interwoven with the fabric of your soul. But like the amputee the vivid, visceral presence of the lost limb, lost lover, lost friend, lost kinsperson will forever be with you. I identify so intimately with your words, thank you ❣🙏🌹
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Re: Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 2:07am
Awe GW.......thrilled to see your smile upon my ink........I’m sorry you feel this so deeply........sending a heart hug to yours from mine........thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 5:21am
That's quite alright. It us my wont to feel deeply about just about everything 😉 Suffice it to say we both see the thestrels.🐎
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15th Jan 2021 1:20pm
Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 3:12am
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15th Jan 2021 1:22pm
Hey IS........you’re so right........that’s what made me change........I became another soul of whom I didn’t know any more.......thank you for your understanding comment.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 3:39am
Dear FG,
As long as I live unrequited love is the worst. Eats you from the inside out and then comes back for more. If you’re lucky you wake up one day cured from it. Your write has spoken volumes for me as the one always sick from loving someone who won’t love me back. It’s a drag but your poem isn’t. You’ve encapsulated that feeling of wondering if the other person even thinks of you let alone loves you as much as you love them. Great write. H🌷
As long as I live unrequited love is the worst. Eats you from the inside out and then comes back for more. If you’re lucky you wake up one day cured from it. Your write has spoken volumes for me as the one always sick from loving someone who won’t love me back. It’s a drag but your poem isn’t. You’ve encapsulated that feeling of wondering if the other person even thinks of you let alone loves you as much as you love them. Great write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Can It Be......
15th Jan 2021 1:31pm
Awe H.......you felt this beyond the words written........soooo sorry you feel this so deeply........it is drag for sure.......life changing along with a piece of your soul gone for life.......thank you for your thoughtful words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Can It Be......
13th Jan 2021 7:10am
Hello beautiful where have you been
Great write, heartfelt and endearing
Love and light
Ron xx
Great write, heartfelt and endearing
Love and light
Ron xx
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15th Jan 2021 1:40pm
Hey my precious friend.......always a blessing to see you........lost my poetic words among the silence........appreciate the luv you leave me.......thank you......honored by the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Can It Be......
14th Jan 2021 10:46pm
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15th Jan 2021 1:44pm
Awe TIG.......always a blessing to see your smile upon my ink........you’re a sacred friend for sure.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Can It Be......
15th Jan 2021 1:49pm
Beautifully written flowergirl... If this was a Hallmark card I would buy it... love the ink! Keep that pen on fire as always *luv & hugs* :D
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Re: Re. Can It Be......
15th Jan 2021 1:56pm
Awe Magic........how you have brought a smile upon my heart.......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Can It Be......
16th Jan 2021 2:38am
Losing yourself in the love for another sometimes makes the love hard and then while with that love you fight harder to find yourself again good job flower
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Re: Re. Can It Be......
18th Jan 2021 1:25am
Hey Kavik.......you’re so very right......sometimes we lose the fight and ourselves........we must not give up on ourselves........thank you for such a thought provoking comment.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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18th Jan 2021 3:03am
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18th Jan 2021 3:09am
Awe Daniel........you’ve made my night........thank you for the blessing of a smile on my face........purple luv & hugs xo :)