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gently
I love you in essence and soul
gently I come
seducing your spirit before we ever touch
your soul and mine coming together
in the depths of honesty...joined
our eyes lock and I know
we are eternal
you move me like no other
I don't how you do it
you smile and all my locks open
we enter into a state of oneness
soul coupling, I know you and you know me
with tender understanding, you come into me
I ache inside for your touch
quietly I rise to greet you
such a sacred meeting of the minds
our greatest need fulfilled
in the arms of my lover never lonely
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9th Jan 2021 1:28am
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9th Jan 2021 1:11pm
good morning dearest Poet thank you for the love on this write I deeply appreciate you ❤
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9th Jan 2021 1:30am
Wow he must be dancing on air. What a lucky man
Beautiful piece oh to be desired and wanted in such a fashion
Love and light
Ron xx
Beautiful piece oh to be desired and wanted in such a fashion
Love and light
Ron xx
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9th Jan 2021 1:13pm
good morning dearest Ron I wish I could say my love is perfect but we all have our moments... he's a good man... I deeply appreciate the love on this write thank you ❤
Re. gently
9th Jan 2021 1:52am
My predecessors. PoetSpeaks & averageJoe69 have said all that needs to be said with this passionate write, ''lucky man''. Beautiful!!!
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Re: Re. gently
9th Jan 2021 1:19pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for the love on this write sometimes I don't know about lucky I feel I am the lucky one... I deeply appreciate your presence here 💕
Re. gently
9th Jan 2021 2:03am
You're words and phrasing have me floating along clinging to each word with nothing but yes, yes yes yes yes ringing in my mind.... You elicited all my yearning... in one poem.
It's perfectly done.
Just stunningly gorgeous, B
Ty so much for sharing
🌹
xo
It's perfectly done.
Just stunningly gorgeous, B
Ty so much for sharing
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. gently
9th Jan 2021 1:37pm
good morning beautiful Blue may our heart's desire be filled... thank you for the love on this write I cherish you 🌹
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9th Jan 2021 4:24am
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9th Jan 2021 6:48am
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9th Jan 2021 1:40pm
aw thank you graciously dearest poet I deeply appreciate the love you show me 💕
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9th Jan 2021 9:19am
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9th Jan 2021 1:41pm
thank you beautiful Olivia for reading and sharing your thoughts it's deeply appreciated 🌹
Re. gently
13th Jan 2021 00:16am
I always enjoy your romantic pieces crimsin, they're so sincerely, passionate and soulful.
"you smile and all my locks open" is not only vivid in description but profound in understanding how he makes you feel.
Wonderful write. You both are lucky and blessed to have each other.
"you smile and all my locks open" is not only vivid in description but profound in understanding how he makes you feel.
Wonderful write. You both are lucky and blessed to have each other.
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