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soul
caress the soul
make it known how much you love someone
tender is the way to the heart
in sync with one another
within the sacred vow be loyal
or break your own heart
it is a special bond
person to person
a need fulfilled
to be loved
a greater gift there isn't
we all need someone
cherished moments shared, human to human
when we become more than
connected to the spirit within
we touch the ethereal
caressing the honesty
we are one
Published 9th Jan 2021
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eAfyFTzZDMM
my love isn't perfect these are things I'm learning love you guys ❤
my love isn't perfect these are things I'm learning love you guys ❤
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9th Jan 2021 1:42pm
'within the sacred vow be loyal
or break your own heart' ... well this is as about as perfect as it gets ... Bless and love ... .
or break your own heart' ... well this is as about as perfect as it gets ... Bless and love ... .
9th Jan 2021 1:46pm
hello dearest FeNyX let's just say it's a hard lesson learned... thank you my friend 💕
9th Jan 2021 1:54pm
9th Jan 2021 1:58pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for reading and commenting... no the soul isn't perfect I have a lot to learn about love...one thing that differs with me is I love forever... even after a fallout with a person my heart is still committed... I deeply appreciate your thoughts here 💕
9th Jan 2021 6:18pm
Love is a learning process and what a process it can be. Looking forward to read more from you
9th Jan 2021 2:03pm
I understand your statement. I have loved and lost, yet still loved the lost and forever the love should always be.
9th Jan 2021 6:04pm
thank you again dearest poet for sharing your thoughts and shared feelings on love ❤
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9th Jan 2021 2:20pm
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9th Jan 2021 6:06pm
good morning dearest poet yes love true love is painful sometimes worthwhile but painful learning what not to do and why is harsh at times but we learn what our heart really feels in the process...I appreciate the read and friendly feedback 💕
9th Jan 2021 2:56pm
Crimsin, this is a beautiful portrayal of the covenant we all long for in finding love. ''Risk'' ! ''Be vulnerable''! It reaps great rewards when to two souls become one and is worth the hurts that may proceed it...Simply Beautiful!!!!
9th Jan 2021 6:07pm
good morning dearest poet thank you for feeling this write so deeply I truly look forward to your presence 🌹
