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My Coffee
Coffee ...
Light aroma ...
He rustles the nostrils, promising ...
And drawing a glance to the cup,
He wants to penetrate me so much ...
A sip, another ... one more ...
Spreading like a hot sun, Touching
me inside everywhere,
As if awakened to life ...
And I shine, smiling ...
Coffee ...
Light aroma ...
He rustles the nostrils, promising ...
And drawing a glance to the cup,
He wants to penetrate me so much ...
A sip, another ... one more ...
Spreading like a hot sun, Touching
me inside everywhere,
As if awakened to life ...
And I shine, smiling ...
Coffee ...
Author's Note
Trying to put my mind in a better place after a very hard week.
I love coffee.
I love coffee.
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Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 3:46pm
Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 3:58pm
Oh FeNyX, never decaf, never! ;) I want the full sensual feeling and touching of caffeine all over my body. ;) 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 3:47pm
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2nd Jan 2021 4:00pm
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 3:53pm
The hotter the better and all the more the heat will permeate throughout the inner walls of the sipper
Very nice inferences (metaphors?)
Very nice inferences (metaphors?)
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 4:05pm
Be careful with those hot comments Tallen, I almost dropped my coffee. lol The hotter the better for sure because you MUST permeate the inner walls. Sip it slow prolonging the 'buzz' till it's unbearable. 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 3:56pm
.....I like my coffee like I like erotic poetry.....Hotttt and Delicious!!! 2 best things in life to wake up to..Morning Sex & Coffee. Loving this very clever write....cream anyone???? hahahaha
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 4:11pm
Only if it's organic heavy cream! I agree with your best ways to wake up. :) Hot and delicious and who needs sugar... 💖 XOXO
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2nd Jan 2021 7:36pm
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2nd Jan 2021 7:54pm
Vampire (medium roast, with an oily bloody coating and a slight taste of coffin dirt), Werewolf (dark roast, bold and wild), Ghost (light roast, decaf because they have no physical form :( )...
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 7:56pm
Now that has to be an awesome cup, Wilber. Roasted in the fires of hell and brewed in earthly sins. Has to have just the right bite. 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 5:38pm
Brava, Kristina❣❣ You capture well the ecstasy of that first cup.of copy in the AM...with cream, for me at least 😁 This is a perfect metaphor for that feeling,
"Spreading like a hot sun"
"Spreading like a hot sun"
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 7:56pm
I hope you got some, GW. (I mean coffee - no, not really), I remember your last write. 💖 XOXO
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2nd Jan 2021 11:30pm
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 5:47pm
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2nd Jan 2021 7:57pm
I hope you got a cup, Ron. Spread the love. Bold and velvety smooth with just the right amount of bitter to know you did it right afterward.💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 8:17pm
It’s Sunday morning here and I definitely need a coffee right now! Great poem!
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 8:38pm
Now I am intrigued, where are you? It sounds like you need some of the coffee from above (no, not heaven), the roasted in hell and brewed in sin stuff since you are an Incubus (and a noble one at that). I imagine you NEED lots of this kind of 'coffee' * cough * 💖 XOXO
Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 8:42pm
Melbourne, Australia.
It is 7:42am Sunday as I type this. Need coffee!
It is 7:42am Sunday as I type this. Need coffee!
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 8:44pm
I kind of feel stupid for asking since I could just look at your profile. Duh! Get some coffee immediately! (some things warrant being a little bossy).
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 9:11pm
Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 10:36pm
Oh my god, how do you not drink coffee? You can always make it an Irish coffee by adding Wh1skey. Okay, that sounds bad (or good, it's all about perspective) now that I say it - at least in my head. 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 9:19pm
Coffee is life fuel! I read a lovely series of books about the colony world Pern (Parallel Earth, Resources Negligible), by Anne McCaffrey. They ran out of coffee quickly, but found a substitute in a tree bark they called Klah. All through their struggles, both societal and environmental, they rely on their klah for sustenance. lol
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Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 10:40pm
Absolutely, I need my life fuel and that's why it was so easy to write about him. (my coffee). Klah, that sounds like Khat to me. Don't ask me how I know about Khat. lol It's a long story. 💖 XOXO Going to have to read that book, any book you mention I am thinking is worth a read...
Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 9:59pm
Re: Re. My Coffee
2nd Jan 2021 10:43pm
Thanks Francisco, I definitely enjoyed my coffee very much. My coffee is very good to me. Old school - ceramic burr grinder, electric kettle, and French press. A lot of grinding and pressing. :p 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
3rd Jan 2021 00:25am
Oh, to drink hot coffee from the CUP; what could be finer...filled with sugar. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re: Re. My Coffee
3rd Jan 2021 00:45am
The only thing finer is NO SUGAR! Don't dilute the coffee, you are sweet enough Oral. * hugs * 💖 XOXO
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3rd Jan 2021 2:32am
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3rd Jan 2021 00:29am
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3rd Jan 2021 00:42am
Mission accomplished, if I have managed to compete with that morning cup then I am feeling pretty good about that. Just trying to keep that arousal throughout the day and night! 💖 XOXO
Re. My Coffee
3rd Jan 2021 1:13am
If Folgers started using this in their advertising, sales will go through the roof.
Never thought about coffee this way before. Can't wait for tomorrow morning now.
Excellent write Kristina!
Never thought about coffee this way before. Can't wait for tomorrow morning now.
Excellent write Kristina!
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Re: Re. My Coffee
3rd Jan 2021 1:28am
I can always count on you for a great comment Wally. I am happy to open your eyes to all the pleasures of coffee. Folgers is like the dirty slut of coffee, we can definitely do better. ;) 💖 XOXO
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5th Jan 2021 10:52pm
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