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Toys in the attic
Please copy & paste the link and listen while reading to get the full experience as I feel it .
And as always thanks for looking.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=IU0rowyzjCY
Thinking back through the eyes of a child
I become reminiscent and overwhelmed at the same time. Thunder erupts overhead, I move in closer to get a better view and light a candle, I love the rain ....
Humbled, I pour myself a glass of brandy
while looking out into the sky;
each rumble shocks my pulse into overdrive my soul dances and comes alive, my heart fills with sadness as the memories flood in and I take time to cry...
And as always thanks for looking.
https://youtube.com/watch?v=IU0rowyzjCY
Thinking back through the eyes of a child
I become reminiscent and overwhelmed at the same time. Thunder erupts overhead, I move in closer to get a better view and light a candle, I love the rain ....
Humbled, I pour myself a glass of brandy
while looking out into the sky;
each rumble shocks my pulse into overdrive my soul dances and comes alive, my heart fills with sadness as the memories flood in and I take time to cry...
Written by
Zazzles
(Broomie)
Published 29th Dec 2020
| Edited 8th Aug 2022
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Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 3:04am
(firstly I'm rubbish at honest critiquing, I leave feedback on what I felt... lol ) A beautiful delivery. Honest and brave, compounded by your awesome music choice, which I so enjoyed.
Ty so much for sharing , Jackie
xoxo
💜you!
-B
Ty so much for sharing , Jackie
xoxo
💜you!
-B
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 3:29am
The fact that you even notice me is more than I could ask for beautiful Queen, my sister soulmate.
I love and appreciate you Bluevelvet to my core
Love always
Jackie xo 😘
I love and appreciate you Bluevelvet to my core
Love always
Jackie xo 😘
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29th Dec 2020 3:13am
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 3:28am
When I saw you and Blue put this in your readers list I have to admit I cried . And this music is so deep and precious it only enhances the will to let it spill..
I love you brother
Always
Jackie xo 😘
I love you brother
Always
Jackie xo 😘
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29th Dec 2020 3:39am
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 3:42am
Oh wow I feel so loved 🥰 thank you brother
I needed this
((((((((((((( Reggie ))))))))))))) 🤗❤️
Love Jackie
Ps Wipes happy tears .....
I needed this
((((((((((((( Reggie ))))))))))))) 🤗❤️
Love Jackie
Ps Wipes happy tears .....
Re. Toys in the attic
This is so beautiful, Zazzles❣❣ The music, the pic, and the comforting words...oh and the Aerosmith title 😄 Memories csn be such a source of melancholic joy. This line made me ponder my fortunate existence,
"Humbled, I pour myself a glass of brandy" 😘 Bravissima bella poeta🌹
"Humbled, I pour myself a glass of brandy" 😘 Bravissima bella poeta🌹
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
Thank you so much for the visit GW I’ve missed you .
Glad you felt my presence tonight
Always
Jackie xo 😘
Glad you felt my presence tonight
Always
Jackie xo 😘
Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 5:18am
Dear Z,
The title of your poem grabbed my attention and reading your poem brought back a flood of wonderful memories playing Barbies in my best friends attic when we were kids. Her house had an attic in which you could play with a window overlooking her street. It was the coolest room (well, not in summer it was actually sweltering then) but the fun we had. Sharing secrets and laughs about latest crushes on the boys we dug. Or whatever the latest drama was in our lives. What a lovely reminiscent write for me, made even more so accompanied by the music. H🌷
The title of your poem grabbed my attention and reading your poem brought back a flood of wonderful memories playing Barbies in my best friends attic when we were kids. Her house had an attic in which you could play with a window overlooking her street. It was the coolest room (well, not in summer it was actually sweltering then) but the fun we had. Sharing secrets and laughs about latest crushes on the boys we dug. Or whatever the latest drama was in our lives. What a lovely reminiscent write for me, made even more so accompanied by the music. H🌷
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
29th Dec 2020 5:26am
Hello Honoria .
I was on my way out and saw this beautiful and relatable post. I am happy to know I made you feel something tonight, and it is my pleasure to make your acquaintance ..
Zazzles 🤗
I was on my way out and saw this beautiful and relatable post. I am happy to know I made you feel something tonight, and it is my pleasure to make your acquaintance ..
Zazzles 🤗
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29th Dec 2020 6:37am
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30th Dec 2020 8:04pm
Hello good woman! Hey you found your way here yay!!! Thanks for your continued support in my writing .. I loves ya too Mama 🤗❤️
Jackie 😘
Jackie 😘
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31st Dec 2020 3:09am
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13th Jan 2021 11:00pm
Re. Toys in the attic
13th Jan 2021 9:22pm
''z''.....a striking emotional write! Your dramatic expressive poetic excellence (accompanied by music) is delivered so vividly. You truly capture the essence of your soul strikingly in verse. My chills as I experience your message through your words are a testament to your beautiful poem. Unreal!!!!
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Re: Re. Toys in the attic
13th Jan 2021 11:01pm
He my now ☺️ I am a bit of a drama Queen lol
Nice to see you this evening FF, thanks for the compliments it does mean a lot 🤗
Thank you for the list too 💜
Jackie Xx
Nice to see you this evening FF, thanks for the compliments it does mean a lot 🤗
Thank you for the list too 💜
Jackie Xx