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Ghostly Shadows (+Reading)
Ghostly shadows
Waltzing in the dark
In an abandoned garden
Where are the stone lions
Where silhouettes melt
A castle of dreams in a purple sky
Where the moonlight pours
Through the lace of the foliage
Where in the mirror of the pond
The sad swan froze
Through gloomy halls
Captivated by the moon
Two ghostly shadows
Glide slowly through the darkness
Silently moving away
Merge into one
Their light movements
Can't be heard in midnight silence
Not a sound, not a soul
On marble steps
Diamond dew
The star canopy shimmers
We circle slowly
Captivated by the moment
Dancing in the dark
Barely touching the floor
Through the twilight of the ages
Through the field of scarlet roses
Over time and death
Elusive haze
Above the plume of clouds
Over an ocean of stars
Waltzing in the dark
Forever inseparable
Waltzing in the dark
In an abandoned garden
Where are the stone lions
Where silhouettes melt
A castle of dreams in a purple sky
Where the moonlight pours
Through the lace of the foliage
Where in the mirror of the pond
The sad swan froze
Through gloomy halls
Captivated by the moon
Two ghostly shadows
Glide slowly through the darkness
Silently moving away
Merge into one
Their light movements
Can't be heard in midnight silence
Not a sound, not a soul
On marble steps
Diamond dew
The star canopy shimmers
We circle slowly
Captivated by the moment
Dancing in the dark
Barely touching the floor
Through the twilight of the ages
Through the field of scarlet roses
Over time and death
Elusive haze
Above the plume of clouds
Over an ocean of stars
Waltzing in the dark
Forever inseparable
Published 29th Dec 2020
Author's Note
This was done a little while back but I never posted it so I guess I will in case some are not sick of these yet. I cannot say I was entirely happy with it but I am still not sure if most people actually listen to them anyway. :)
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29th Dec 2020 00:32am
I am in absolute Awe with this poetic Wonderment! Your narration somehow augmented your already phenomenal poem. I am reading over and over, closing my eyes and listening. and reading along with you again and again!!!! This poetry is a total work of art! ......KUDOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
29th Dec 2020 1:54am
I guess there is at least one listener then and if you listen more than once I suppose that counts too. :) I am speechless and truly humbled by your incredible comment and feedback. I always struggle to respond to such praise. You really made me feel much better about this. Definitely smiling! Thank you so much! 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 00:39am
29th Dec 2020 1:57am
Thank you so much for the comment, Tallquietguy. I am really happy you liked it and found the imagery compelling and haunting. I really appreciate your feedback a lot. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 00:45am
Beautifully haunting, that was amazing all the better read with such intensity loved it
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
29th Dec 2020 2:00am
Hey Ron, I am really happy you found it beautifully haunting and really appreciate the feedback so much especially on these because I am always reluctant to post. So if you enjoyed the read that means a lot to me. I like intensity. ;) 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 00:51am
I listened
You're too hard on yourself
Eloquent
You are an indeed a poet Kx
Like
You're too hard on yourself
Eloquent
You are an indeed a poet Kx
Like
29th Dec 2020 2:04am
Geez, I have heard that before (a lot, lol). A poet, okay I will take your word for it (not really but I am trying) and I keep being told to change my description but baby steps. And I do love eloquent, that definitely makes me really happy. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 00:54am
Lovely write and good read ... like the animation and music ... Bless and love ... .
29th Dec 2020 2:06am
Hey FeNyX, I am so happy you stopped by and enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. It means a lot to me and even more so on something like this. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 1:46am
A great and captivating write, engaging mental discipline. Thanks. Hug and peace, oral
29th Dec 2020 2:12am
Hey Oral, Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. I love the sound of engaging mental discipline. :) It means a lot to me and more so on something like this. I really appreciate the hug and your visit. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 2:18am
Kristina, I adore this piece. Super romantic.
Write on little sister ❤️
Hugs
Jackie xx
Write on little sister ❤️
Hugs
Jackie xx
Hey Zazz, it is always lovely to see you and thank you so much for the awesome comment, I love it. It means a lot to me and little sister, that really makes me smile. :) 💖 XOXO * hugs *
29th Dec 2020 3:37am
29th Dec 2020 12:56pm
Hey BC, thank you so much for the comment. I am really happy you loved it and to get your feedback especially on these since you have done so many great recordings, it really means a lot to me. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 4:01am
29th Dec 2020 12:55pm
Thank you so much for the comment, Francisco. We definitely need love in whatever form in comes, sometimes its dark. :) 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 2:38pm
This was splendidly written with each stroke of a gentle brush nicely composed dear poetess..respect
29th Dec 2020 3:56pm
Hey Stoney, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment. I am really happy you liked it! :) 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 5:34pm
YOU GOT SKILLS AND IT SHOWS THROUGH YOUR VOICE AND WRITING THROUGH PEN UPON PAPER 🙏😎
29th Dec 2020 7:47pm
Dear K,
I’m out of complementary words to attach to your poetry. My lexicon is depleted. I can only bow in adoration.
What an image filled piece. And listening to it was like being taken on a journey narrated so beautifully as to see the hero and heroine of the story, dancing in timeless love. Kind of reminded me of the original movie The Ghost and Mrs. Muir. I loved it and this poem is as epic as I found that movie the first time I saw it.(not when it originally came out, I’m not as old as all that) but...you know...when they air these gems on old movies tv ☺️.
The more you lend your voice to these writes the more I’m convinced you’ve another lucrative career ahead. However, that aside, this is another academy award winning piece of writing. Beautiful. H🌷
I’m out of complementary words to attach to your poetry. My lexicon is depleted. I can only bow in adoration.
What an image filled piece. And listening to it was like being taken on a journey narrated so beautifully as to see the hero and heroine of the story, dancing in timeless love. Kind of reminded me of the original movie The Ghost and Mrs. Muir. I loved it and this poem is as epic as I found that movie the first time I saw it.(not when it originally came out, I’m not as old as all that) but...you know...when they air these gems on old movies tv ☺️.
The more you lend your voice to these writes the more I’m convinced you’ve another lucrative career ahead. However, that aside, this is another academy award winning piece of writing. Beautiful. H🌷
And I have run out of words to reply to your spectacular comments. Does that mean we are even somehow? lol Really Honoria, I don't think my heart can handle a comment like this so please be careful. I am truly humbled so much. I have never seen The Ghost and Mrs. Muir so I will have to look that one up. Old movies TV, got it. ;) Another lucrative career, oh no I could not handle that - just going to pretend you did not say it and move on quickly. Thank you so much, really I feel like I have not said near enough to express how much your comment means to me. But I am going to start just typing a bunch of gibberish so I guess I will stop now. 💖 XOXO
29th Dec 2020 9:43pm
Your voice is a traesure, sweet Kristine. Doubly love the poem and amen to what Honoria said😘
29th Dec 2020 10:11pm
Hey GW, that's a really sweet thing to say. I really appreciate that on these so much; definitely makes me feel better, thank you so much. And I am really glad you love the poem and want me to speak gibberish since you said amen to what Honoria said. lol 💖 XOXO
30th Dec 2020 4:50am
It's always a joy to hear your voice reciting poetry. I loved the dark and loving theme in this piece, each line seemed to float in ethereal motif.
Beautiful work.
Beautiful work.
30th Dec 2020 12:59pm
Thanks Wally, you have made for a nice morning seeing your beautiful comment. I am always very reluctant with these and so you saying it's a joy really means more to me than you know and makes me feel a lot better. And your description is perfect as well. 💖 XOXO
30th Dec 2020 2:55pm
I have to confess I'm one of those people who often flies by without listening, and even without a comment... but I did listen to this! I find it so interesting to hear poetry read in an accent different from the voice that reads it in my head. It adds a whole new dimension of personality to the work. It also motivates me to record some of my own, which I still haven't been brave enough to do yet...
Nice work, poet!! 🙂
Nice work, poet!! 🙂
30th Dec 2020 5:04pm
I love that you shoot straight, BT. :) And I am so glad you were able to take a moment to listen and I appreciate your thoughts so much because posting these is always a mental struggle. So hearing your experience that it added another dimension is great. I am sure you are much braver than me so you should just do it. 💖 XOXO
30th Dec 2020 5:16pm
You have the talent and should showcase it. Don't waste the beauty of your words.
30th Dec 2020 5:25pm
I think that is the most concise comment that has ever left me speechless. I don't know what to say other than that it is such a beautiful sentiment and I really appreciate it more than you know. 💖 XOXO
2nd Jan 2021 10:18pm
Gorgeous composition in lovely proportion of depth, meter, nicely paced in your audio, dimensions of your enunciation and the background track lending a lovely sensitivity to the whole. Beautiful work. 💖🎶🙏
2nd Jan 2021 10:58pm
Thank you so much for the comment and feedback Daniel, you always make me feel so good about these because I am always so hesitant to post. I really appreciate it so much and I am glad you mentioned the background track. I never spend a lot of time looking for those and finding free to use can be difficult so I am glad this one worked. 💖 XOXO
Anonymous
17th Jan 2021 00:04am
You have such a lovely voice. It accentuates the words beautifully
17th Jan 2021 00:11am
Thank you Rachael, that means so much to me. I think your reading was so much better than mine so it is really great to hear this from you. 💖 XOXO
17th Jan 2021 9:58pm
The poem and reading are masterful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace, oral
17th Jan 2021 10:40pm
Thank you so much for your continued sweet comments and support. I am so happy you thought the reading was masterful, I really appreciate your feedback a lot. 💖 XOXO
