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Stasis
with each
anguished
beat
it
s l o w s
.... then,
eventually...
stops.
Now
frozen,
forever cold
~
hardened
Author's Note
İBlu2020
To err is human and I have. I WILL place myself on a path towards self betterment. Asking questions first with open communication.
To err is human and I have. I WILL place myself on a path towards self betterment. Asking questions first with open communication.
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Apr 2021 11:45am
18th Dec 2020 6:57am
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Thank you for reading and your thoughtful insights. I appreciate your list add as well. 🙏
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xo
B
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B
Re. Stasis
18th Dec 2020 8:14am
You will never freeze my love will warm you my beautiful friend. Sometimes the world is cold and just letting it wash over you numbing everything sounds like the answer. It ain't you my love are to important to many their love will never let you freeze
Love and light and warmth
Ron xx
Love and light and warmth
Ron xx
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Your very kind words are circling 'round my thoughts. I thank you for that, the list add and all your support and encouragement. You're steadfast and sure. I'm so appreciative of you.
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xoxo
B
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xoxo
B
Re. Stasis
18th Dec 2020 12:10pm
BV Your strong beautiful mind spills the most impactful, emotional, and exquisite poetry. Your amazing heart always carries that pilot that ignites with an inferno of beauty expressed in verse. I share the purgatory of feeling trapped between a powerful mind and fragile heart. Your beauty is illuminated by this incredible vulnerable write! ..hugs!
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I take that cyber hug and let it last and last. I'm just exhausted in thought and body, so excuse me if I have a muddled reply. I keep using the word 'kind' or kindness, yet I cannot come up with anything more apropos. Your comments are uplifting when I need them to be and kind in a way that's often hard to sincerely convey. You are masterful on these fronts...Really! Much love for the RL add and all your beautiful generosity.
I am a Blue who's aware of just how lucky she is.. even in heartache.
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xoxo
B
I am a Blue who's aware of just how lucky she is.. even in heartache.
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xoxo
B
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18th Dec 2020 12:31pm
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18th Dec 2020 12:35pm
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18th Dec 2020 12:55pm
This one is excellent on so many levels ... its layout on the page ... its flow ... the varied font ... which is jarring ... in a good way ... a clear ... yet bold vulnerability ... I think this is one of your very best poems so far ...
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18th Dec 2020 2:14pm
Wow, LilD, That's extremely uplifting to read. A much needed boost to my morale and my day ahead in general. I'm appreciative for that summation and the list add. I hope you have an equally wonderful day, as well.
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xo
B
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B
Re. Stasis
18th Dec 2020 3:45pm
Death(or stasis) may come in winter, but all is born anew in the springs loving light ... Good write ... Bless and love ... .
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18th Dec 2020 5:45pm
Aww... You're spot on, FeNyX, Ty so much for reading and your lovely thoughts.
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B
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B
Re. Stasis
18th Dec 2020 3:49pm
❄⚘ a brisk little write to capture an alluring and graceful heart... frozen in time... remains forever beautiful... until the frost lifts in the gifts of warmth to slowly beat and love again...☀️🌹
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18th Dec 2020 5:50pm
"The gifts of warmth "Eli says... just so perfect.
I swear you have a direct line to the 'instantly feel better, Blue" button that seems to be hidden from me!! Where's it hidden at??..... lol. Your comments are soothing and I'm feeling better already.
Ty for the RL add and all you do to brighten my mood. You're an amazing friend, Eli
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Ty so much
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xoxo
B
I swear you have a direct line to the 'instantly feel better, Blue" button that seems to be hidden from me!! Where's it hidden at??..... lol. Your comments are soothing and I'm feeling better already.
Ty for the RL add and all you do to brighten my mood. You're an amazing friend, Eli
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Ty so much
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xoxo
B
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18th Dec 2020 8:14pm
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Dec 2020 5:47pm
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18th Dec 2020 5:53pm
Ty, Tim
I always enjoy your feedback.
So grateful for your list add and taking the time to generate an insightful comment
Much love and respect,
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xoxo
B
I always enjoy your feedback.
So grateful for your list add and taking the time to generate an insightful comment
Much love and respect,
🌹 🌹
xoxo
B
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- Edited 20th Sep 2021 1:45am
18th Dec 2020 8:50pm
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18th Dec 2020 9:24pm
Ty so much Wilber!
I hear ya, it is quite sad, but I'd rather leave that sadness on my cyber paper than carry it around like a silly albatross... lol... (is my way of thinking) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the list ad! Your always a pleasure to see upon my page!
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xoxo
B
I hear ya, it is quite sad, but I'd rather leave that sadness on my cyber paper than carry it around like a silly albatross... lol... (is my way of thinking) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the list ad! Your always a pleasure to see upon my page!
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
B
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18th Dec 2020 11:10pm
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18th Dec 2020 11:26pm
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19th Dec 2020 3:58am
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19th Dec 2020 8:26am
Vivid description, the process and eventually the hardened state of something that was once living.
Excellent photo to accompany the verse.
Great work!
Excellent photo to accompany the verse.
Great work!
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19th Dec 2020 2:42pm