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Every time I think
I have arrived at the peak
I see another
Slope to climb; wide-eyed
I lumber onward
THOUGHTS ON MY EXPANDING ABILITY TO LOVE
I have arrived at the peak
I see another
Slope to climb; wide-eyed
I lumber onward
THOUGHTS ON MY EXPANDING ABILITY TO LOVE
Published 7th Dec 2020
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7th Dec 2020 1:21am
7th Dec 2020 1:31am
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7th Dec 2020 1:29am
7th Dec 2020 4:47am
Dear S,
I love how you ended this poem. It flipped my mindset in a 180 and I so appreciated it. As I first began reading it I thought I know what he means. Life’s chaos never ends. One mess cleans up and right behind it is another. Then I got to the end and saw “ THOUGHTS ON MY EXPANDING ABILITY TO LOVE” omg! He’s so right! There is boundless opportunity to find love up and down these rocky peaks. Really lovely write. H🌷
I love how you ended this poem. It flipped my mindset in a 180 and I so appreciated it. As I first began reading it I thought I know what he means. Life’s chaos never ends. One mess cleans up and right behind it is another. Then I got to the end and saw “ THOUGHTS ON MY EXPANDING ABILITY TO LOVE” omg! He’s so right! There is boundless opportunity to find love up and down these rocky peaks. Really lovely write. H🌷
7th Dec 2020 5:05am
