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cradled remembrance.
nostalgia's tender touch
cradles my face
a window or such portal-like
Oh cherished memories
become a tangible of true
To thine own touch—
so selfish,
in my heart's desire;
I grasp with both hands
each thread of remembering~
to find my way...
my way,
...... back to all I once knew...
you.
Published 29th Nov 2020
| Edited 26th Dec 2020
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29th Nov 2020 7:49pm
29th Nov 2020 8:34pm
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29th Nov 2020 8:13pm
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29th Nov 2020 9:02pm
29th Nov 2020 11:20pm
Ariadne's thread leads nowhere compared to this wonderful poem, Blue.
Amor Fati...Harry
Amor Fati...Harry
29th Nov 2020 11:33pm
Your kindness and wonderful sentiments warm me, Harry. Ty for reading and the list add. You make me smile whenever I see your notifications!
💜
xo
B
💜
xo
B
30th Nov 2020 4:02am
Ahhh the nostalgia of feeling safe... feeling loved... knowing where you belong... where one day the reminisce will become the rendezvous... ⚘🔥 lovely blue...
30th Nov 2020 4:19am
You must have been peeking inside my head as I was writing... lol... You are pretty damn close to my motivations, Eli. Talk about sympatico!
I thank you for reading and your RL add......
So completely grateful for your eloquent comments. I especially enjoy your lovely support and encouragement.
💜 🌹 💜
xoxo
-B
I thank you for reading and your RL add......
So completely grateful for your eloquent comments. I especially enjoy your lovely support and encouragement.
💜 🌹 💜
xoxo
-B
30th Nov 2020 5:35am
30th Nov 2020 2:26pm
30th Nov 2020 8:43am
Tears...like little coin drops forming rosary beads of remembrance. That's the way I see this...awesome
30th Nov 2020 2:26pm
30th Nov 2020 6:17pm
...a Beautiful sentimental and dreamy write! Your words have a pulse and I am thirsting for the kind of happiness felt in this submission. Your beautiful memories remain timeless! Amazing!!!
30th Nov 2020 7:11pm
Dear FF,
I'm overwhelmed by such lovely comments. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and highlight my day with your thoughtful sentiments. What luck, to have such terrific support! I am grateful for you and the generous RL add that you've bestowed.
Always such a pleasure,
🌹💜
xo - B
I'm overwhelmed by such lovely comments. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and highlight my day with your thoughtful sentiments. What luck, to have such terrific support! I am grateful for you and the generous RL add that you've bestowed.
Always such a pleasure,
🌹💜
xo - B
30th Nov 2020 11:03pm
Loved the nostalgia in this. Pictures (whether polaroids or albums) have that nostalgic feel, it's more tangible, more melancholic.
Awesome verse Blue.
Awesome verse Blue.
30th May 2022 1:14am
This poem would tidy up the mind of a lazy muthetfucker in a relationship. U alright Blue! U the Velvet!
