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Apollo
It's all for you
son of Zeus and Leto
I am your muse
You woke up
a sleeping volcano
to bathe
in hot lava,
red hot passions,
happiness and misery
for your pleasure
God of poetry
through the clouds
look with a smile
for your inspiration
is in me
It's so cruel
It's so sweet
to conclude eternity
in an instant ...
And die
in a hot stream
of words
so that you
can get pleasure
Tie my eyes with a
white silk ribbon,
Take my hands
and lead me
Along bridges
and canals,
through a field
with tulips
Along the water,
above it,
up to the clouds
in a flurry of
beautiful words
Take me to
the pine trees
and rocks,
Where the horizon
is always
so dazzlingly clear,
Where peace will
meet us,
where no one will
find us,
Where golden rays
caress the bowstring
of rainbows ...
Inspiring words
Lay me gently
in the tall grass,
Weave scarlet poppies
in my hair ...
Bend over me
Heartbeat,
flutter of wings
over the crystal
reflection of
beautiful words
Blindfold me,
lift me in your arms,
Take me to this
invented paradise,
Lay me gently
among the flowers,
Stay and
don't disappear
anymore ...
Your muse
son of Zeus and Leto
I am your muse
You woke up
a sleeping volcano
to bathe
in hot lava,
red hot passions,
happiness and misery
for your pleasure
God of poetry
through the clouds
look with a smile
for your inspiration
is in me
It's so cruel
It's so sweet
to conclude eternity
in an instant ...
And die
in a hot stream
of words
so that you
can get pleasure
Tie my eyes with a
white silk ribbon,
Take my hands
and lead me
Along bridges
and canals,
through a field
with tulips
Along the water,
above it,
up to the clouds
in a flurry of
beautiful words
Take me to
the pine trees
and rocks,
Where the horizon
is always
so dazzlingly clear,
Where peace will
meet us,
where no one will
find us,
Where golden rays
caress the bowstring
of rainbows ...
Inspiring words
Lay me gently
in the tall grass,
Weave scarlet poppies
in my hair ...
Bend over me
Heartbeat,
flutter of wings
over the crystal
reflection of
beautiful words
Blindfold me,
lift me in your arms,
Take me to this
invented paradise,
Lay me gently
among the flowers,
Stay and
don't disappear
anymore ...
Your muse
Author's Note
This is dedicated to all of those who have given suggestions, helped me grow, and provided encouragement. You have made me better. Thank you! An attempt at being poetic. :)
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Apollo
23rd Nov 2020 11:13pm
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23rd Nov 2020 11:20pm
Thank you so much for the comment Adagio, I really appreciate your beautiful compliment a lot. 💖
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23rd Nov 2020 11:20pm
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23rd Nov 2020 11:24pm
Thank you so much for the comment NOT-an AverageJoe, if you can write like that without a muse, I can only imagine what you would create with one. 💖
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23rd Nov 2020 11:33pm
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23rd Nov 2020 11:34pm
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23rd Nov 2020 11:47pm
Self restraint isn't one of my strong points, but I'm working on it kinda sorta 😁
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24th Nov 2020 00:03am
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24th Nov 2020 00:56am
Thank you so much for the comment I_IS_ME, I really appreciate your support and encouragement so much. 💖
Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 00:18am
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24th Nov 2020 00:59am
Thank you so much Poetspeak. I appreciate your feedback so much, that is a very beautiful compliment for me. 💖
Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 3:28am
Stunning write Kristina. I liked the confidence, life a flower blooming in the sun, giving off a fragrance for all to admire.
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 4:08pm
I am stunned by your comment. :) Thank you so much for the wonderfully poetic compliment. I really appreciate your continued support a lot. 💖
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Re: Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 4:11pm
I will ATTEMPT to respond to your amazing comment. You certainly know how to make a point. :) "greater depth, more intricacy and a wider emotional and literary palette" is wonderful feedback, I love it. You definitely made me laugh with the POETESS vanity plate idea. I am far from ready for that. lol
But I really appreciate your encouragement and vote of confidence so much. 💖
But I really appreciate your encouragement and vote of confidence so much. 💖
Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 5:19am
Everyone here has already said it so perfectly ....
This is a beautiful write
and yes kristina you can write :)
Keep doing what you do
This is a beautiful write
and yes kristina you can write :)
Keep doing what you do
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Re: Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 4:14pm
Thank you so much for the support and encouragement. I really appreciate it more than you know! And your artwork is incredibly beautiful and inspiring. :) 💖
Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 6:59am
Bravissima, Kristina❣❣ Such a wonderful conglomeration of classical images strung together so beautifully...string of pearls. I love this passage,
"Where golden rays
caress the bowstring
of rainbows ..."
"Where golden rays
caress the bowstring
of rainbows ..."
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Re: Re. Apollo
24th Nov 2020 4:17pm
I love your beautiful description which seems to encapsulate my effort to use mythology and thinking of classical images to create something poetic. Your feedback, encouragement, and help has been invaluable. I really appreciate it more than you know. 💖
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24th Nov 2020 8:03am
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24th Nov 2020 4:15pm
Thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and encouragement Francisco. I really appreciate it a lot. 💖
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25th Nov 2020 3:26am
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24th Nov 2020 7:12pm
This is so, so gorgeous, Kristina! An incredible tapestry of beautiful words and images painted before my eyes. Wonderful, thank you for sharing. You've definitely grown as a writer with time ❤️
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24th Nov 2020 7:57pm
Thank you so much for all of the support and encouragement. I really appreciate it more than you know. Your writing is always amazing so this is such an incredible compliment for me. 💖
Re. Apollo
25th Nov 2020 2:11am
Dear K,
This poem is epic, really. Between your write and your avatar all I see are gods and goddesses. Everyone is beautiful and talented and prolific. I like that it makes me want to aspire to this, but feel more like the pleb. There is a particular gift you have, it’s gentle and kind in your writing that makes everyone feel a part of it, I don’t know that this description makes any sense but your writes have a voice that is understandable. I’m afraid I’m useless in so far as suggesting where a comma should go, or a dash in stead. But your meaning is priceless for those of us lucky enough to read your poems.
H 🌷
This poem is epic, really. Between your write and your avatar all I see are gods and goddesses. Everyone is beautiful and talented and prolific. I like that it makes me want to aspire to this, but feel more like the pleb. There is a particular gift you have, it’s gentle and kind in your writing that makes everyone feel a part of it, I don’t know that this description makes any sense but your writes have a voice that is understandable. I’m afraid I’m useless in so far as suggesting where a comma should go, or a dash in stead. But your meaning is priceless for those of us lucky enough to read your poems.
H 🌷
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Wow, I am speechless and beyond humbled by your generous words. You have really made me so happy. You are definitely no pleb, your writing is incredible and inspiring. For once, I felt kind of good about this one; and I over use commas :) lol I am so grateful for your encouragement and thoughts, you are truly a beautiful person. There is nothing I can say that would adequately express how much your comment means to me. 💖 xoxo
Re. Apollo
25th Nov 2020 3:19am
Stunning, brilliant and beautiful beyond words! This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Your talent has no bounds and I have a deep respect for you as a fellow Poetess! You rock!
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25th Nov 2020 9:19pm
Wow, you and Honoria clearly have a conspiracy to render me completely incapable of speaking so I can just re-iterate everything above. I am beyond humbled by your comment and so grateful, you are truly a beautiful person. And again, there is nothing I can say that would express how much your comment means to me. 💖 xoxo
Re. Apollo
26th Nov 2020 4:41am
Thank you for the beautiful tribute, Kristina. It is my honor and privilege to be here with you all.
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26th Nov 2020 4:04pm
Thank you for the comment Daniel, it is clear that so many here consider you a vital part of the community. As always, thanks for the feedback and support. 💖
Re. Apollo
29th Nov 2020 11:10pm
I always like to add a drop of the Dionysian to my poetry...this is such a beautiful poem...his tenth Muse...Kristina.
Amor Fati...Harry
Amor Fati...Harry
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Re: Re. Apollo
29th Nov 2020 11:34pm
Carpe vinum. Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Harry, I do love your Dionysian and other influences in your beautiful poetry. Κριστίνα - the tenth muse, that is what I was going for. ;) 💖
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Beautiful!!!!....with this dedication there is no greater reward that you could have possibly bestowed upon all of your very incredibly talented and encouraging writers/friends who have become part of your D.U.P. family. Paying homage to them with this truly amazing poem is both graceful and beautiful on your part. Your poem has been an incredible experience to read with every splendid and inspirational verse. All I can say is that the elegance of your words is in itself an inspiration. Your emotions are pure and genuine, and your soul flows from your pen in poetry beautifully. Bravo!!!!
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4th Dec 2020 7:51pm
You are determined to make it difficult to respond to your amazing comment. I am truly humbled by your beautiful remarks. I consider being referred to as graceful a compliment that always touches me at the core. I am so happy that you can feel the writing flows from the heart and soul - pure and genuine. Your sensitivity is a gift, it has brightened my day. Thank you!