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honesty becomes me
dwindles the faith
turning into dust
willful inclination so full of lust
I wonder after honesty
she is me fully exposed
the truth of me the wine
the guile the dregs
knowing oneself so difficult
so often I live in avoidance
until pain forces me to face myself in the mirror
I cast a forceful shadow
intimidating to my inner woman
I wonder after this woman
could this really be me?
so fierce yet afraid of to be the warrior
there is nothing more beautiful than honesty
even when faced with the darker truths of one's desires
wholesome and pure energy
expounds and explodes from me
I evolve in beauty
becoming a real woman you can believe in
Published 21st Nov 2020
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21st Nov 2020 4:56pm
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21st Nov 2020 10:59pm
thank you dearest Tim most graciously I deeply appreciate you reading and leaving a wonderful comment 💕
21st Nov 2020 5:31pm
Beautifully written, as you exude that exact thing you cherish... beauty.
That last line is poetic perfection
Ty for sharing with us, B
—it's always such a pleasure
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-B
That last line is poetic perfection
Ty for sharing with us, B
—it's always such a pleasure
🌹💜🌹
xoxo
-B
21st Nov 2020 11:00pm
hey there beautiful Blue thank you lovely one for the love here it's deeply felt ❤
21st Nov 2020 5:49pm
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Loved this, great work sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
Loved this, great work sweetie
Love and light
Ron xx
21st Nov 2020 11:01pm
thank you dearest Ron for the love I feel it... I deeply appreciate you learning who one is half the battle ❤
21st Nov 2020 7:35pm
21st Nov 2020 11:02pm
thank you dearest Adagio for reading and leaving a comment I appreciate your thoughts 💕
21st Nov 2020 9:22pm
21st Nov 2020 11:03pm
thank you dearest Poet for the love today I feel it ❤ I deeply appreciate you...
25th Nov 2020 9:51pm
"knowing oneself so difficult
so often I live in avoidance" and that whole stanza spoke to me (well, except the part of my inner woman)...
Truly a reflective piece crim. We always have to be honest with ourselves first and foremost.
Great verse.
so often I live in avoidance" and that whole stanza spoke to me (well, except the part of my inner woman)...
Truly a reflective piece crim. We always have to be honest with ourselves first and foremost.
Great verse.
25th Nov 2020 10:12pm
good afternoon dearest Wally thank you graciously for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment... yes we have to be honest with ourselves no matter the pain of it... I deeply appreciate you ❤
