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read me !!!!
To you that I love so much
I loved the way you sed LEAVE ME
at the time I NEED YOU THE MOST
YOUR ANGER TOURED ME LIKE A UNLOVED FREAK
THE WAY YOU MADE FEEL THAT DAY!!!
SO ALONE SO HATED AND FORSAKEN
JUST LEAVE ME HERE LIKE A UNLOVED DOG
HOLING AT THE MOON JUST DING TO BE AWAKEN
Please comment
I'm working on a song.... So any comment will help :)
I loved the way you sed LEAVE ME
at the time I NEED YOU THE MOST
YOUR ANGER TOURED ME LIKE A UNLOVED FREAK
THE WAY YOU MADE FEEL THAT DAY!!!
SO ALONE SO HATED AND FORSAKEN
JUST LEAVE ME HERE LIKE A UNLOVED DOG
HOLING AT THE MOON JUST DING TO BE AWAKEN
Please comment
I'm working on a song.... So any comment will help :)
Published 3rd Feb 2012
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I love how this poem seems to come from your soul. It's intense and grabs at me. But the spelling mistakes are a bit distracting.
3rd Feb 2012 3:50am
Haha ya im a crappy speller.... As you can tell... But al fined a way to fix it :) thanks
12th Aug 2012 8:38pm
theres a free program online that corrects spelling or underlines it and offers a different way to spell it. loved the poem by the way.
