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Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 8:26am
Oooh, I'm glad I clicked back over to this to see the visual accompaniment. Nicely done, and solid advice 👌🙏
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Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 8:28am
Re. Still-Warm Bones
Anonymous
31st Oct 2020 4:15pm
So astute, Luna. One should only take pride in being Honest, not just with others, but with the Universe as well.
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Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 10:33pm
Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 6:29pm
A beautiful presentation, Luna! It's filled with solid truth, and the colors are perfect.
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Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 10:34pm
Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 8:26pm
Dear L,
So does this mean I have to cop to my feelings of still liking the putz of my dreams even though he’s dumb? If so, then damn it!
What I especially admire about the formatting of your poem is the spooky background in between the feuding parties and the attention to type. The still warm bones is red depicting life and the icy white of the rest have a frosty appearance. Super slick piece! H🌷
So does this mean I have to cop to my feelings of still liking the putz of my dreams even though he’s dumb? If so, then damn it!
What I especially admire about the formatting of your poem is the spooky background in between the feuding parties and the attention to type. The still warm bones is red depicting life and the icy white of the rest have a frosty appearance. Super slick piece! H🌷
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Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
31st Oct 2020 10:36pm
Lol oof 😅.
Thank you so much for your kindness, it never fails to make my day brighter 💜
Thank you so much for your kindness, it never fails to make my day brighter 💜
Re. Still-Warm Bones
1st Nov 2020 00:59am
It is a feat to capture me with a single stanza. Expertly rendered with awareness I've come to respect through your friendship.
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Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
1st Nov 2020 2:27am
Thank you so much Daniel. I appreciate your friendship and your kind words, always 💜
Re. Still-Warm Bones
1st Nov 2020 2:53am
Re: Re. Still-Warm Bones
1st Nov 2020 3:16am