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My refuge
I find solace in your arms.
It's a refuge
My shelter...
I wish to make it my home
so that after I die,
there, my soul can linger...
It's a refuge
My shelter...
I wish to make it my home
so that after I die,
there, my soul can linger...
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Re. My refuge
27th Oct 2020 8:38pm
Re: Re. My refuge
28th Oct 2020 8:24am
Glad to know that this piece could be of any help to you...
Thanks a lot, dear poetess for your kind support 😊🌷
Thanks a lot, dear poetess for your kind support 😊🌷
Re. My refuge
27th Oct 2020 9:16pm
Re: Re. My refuge
28th Oct 2020 8:45am
Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for your kind input. I put 'there' for emphasis...
Sans that word, I feel an emptiness In that sentence....
I was wondering if its grammatically wrong to insert 'there'?
Sans that word, I feel an emptiness In that sentence....
I was wondering if its grammatically wrong to insert 'there'?
Re. My refuge
28th Oct 2020 1:44am
Re. My refuge
28th Oct 2020 4:10am
Dear I,
Perfectly beautiful piece. Romantic and loving. Reminds me of classic poets like Browning and Dickinson. Fabulous write. H🌷
Perfectly beautiful piece. Romantic and loving. Reminds me of classic poets like Browning and Dickinson. Fabulous write. H🌷
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Re: Re. My refuge
28th Oct 2020 8:46am
Wow, your wonderful review made my day, dear poetess. Thanks a bunch for the visit. 🌹
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28th Oct 2020 10:03am
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Re: Re. My refuge
30th Oct 2020 7:54pm
Thank you so much, dear poetess for the lovely review and the RL add 🌹 Much appreciated 😊
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5th Nov 2020 8:54am
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5th Nov 2020 8:54am
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Re: Re. My refuge
24th Feb 2022 6:58am
Thank you so much for the gracious comments... So honoured that this piece found a place in your reading list... Much thanks, dear poet 😊🌹