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Senryu
10/27/20
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10/27/20
We dwell in low notes
The G string’s rattle and buzz
Suggests a loose nut
BASS DESIRES
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
27th Oct 2020
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Re. 10/27/20
Ahavati
(Tams)
27th Oct 2020 3:25pm
Now THAT'S clever!
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
27th Oct 2020 3:27pm
Haha thanks.
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NewBeginnings
27th Oct 2020 3:37pm
Clever little senryu, Kumar! Nicely done
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
27th Oct 2020 3:53pm
Thanks New!
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Eerie
27th Oct 2020 6:11pm
I see what you did there...So clever :D
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
27th Oct 2020 6:14pm
Thanks E!
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Solomon_Song
27th Oct 2020 7:59pm
Love double entendre given the musical terms.
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Honoria
28th Oct 2020 4:28am
Dear S,
LOL! Fantastic. Naughty, but fantastic. I very much enjoyed this and the visual in my minds eye this whipped up. That G string was well played. H🌷
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DaVinci_07
(Leo)
18th Nov 2020 7:04pm
Thanks for the smile. Clever.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
18th Nov 2020 7:07pm
You're welcome :)
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