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thoughts on aging
the way the faces of
violets sneer looking
out of the vase
how rain is sandpaper
to the skin
that hope is the evilest
temptation conceived
of by God
turning over a new leaf
and finding the other
side dried and colorless
magic leaves the
eye and seeks youth
as it's nest
life mocks life,
a butterfly without
color...
flying in a curare
wind
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Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 4:57am
The glimpse into my
very very eminent future
Terrifically terrifying
lol
just an amazing write
💜
B
xo
very very eminent future
Terrifically terrifying
lol
just an amazing write
💜
B
xo
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 1:26pm
I will be 62 in a few months. I now realize that there are more days behind me than in front of me. Thank you for the kind words, Blue.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 12:47pm
your existential eyes are deeper in the observing versing moments.. of pain of hope.. of this life of time .. that doesnt wait for any.. your capturing them in all subtle poetics .. is defying the time & life itself. its eternal.. as poetry as aert as love as truth. this one move me deep .. in a heavy feeling .. wordless.. light & love BK x:)
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 1:30pm
Poetry is enternal, sadly I come with an expiration date.
Thank you for the kindness of your words, uma. The older I get, the more important such things become to me.
biggest furry hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the kindness of your words, uma. The older I get, the more important such things become to me.
biggest furry hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
Everyday something else hurts
I slap on the full spectrum CBD cream and keep on marching
Ironically my age seems to bother my younger friends more than it bothers me
Aging sucks but there is some clarity
All the crap you used to think about that seemed so crucial now seems benign
I might be too upbeat huh?
Or am I being negative?
Not sure
68 in November
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I slap on the full spectrum CBD cream and keep on marching
Ironically my age seems to bother my younger friends more than it bothers me
Aging sucks but there is some clarity
All the crap you used to think about that seemed so crucial now seems benign
I might be too upbeat huh?
Or am I being negative?
Not sure
68 in November
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 5:23pm
You are neither being to upbeat or negative. You are being honest and genuine. That what I most appreciate most about you PoetSpeak.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 6:44pm
I've concluded (at 64) that we're all here to learn to grow old gracefully - hopefully becoming more wise in the process rather than more senile. A journey requiring a forever increasing amount of patience and humility in my experience. At least it gives meaning to life 😊
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 9:43pm
Very nice, Josh. Now if I can get my body to go along...lol.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 10:32pm
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24th Sep 2020 11:42pm
Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 11:38pm
Most mornings I use the Buddhist tool of examining the impermanence of life...mine...those I love...the Universe. Beautiful poem my friend.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
24th Sep 2020 11:45pm
Thank you so much, Harry. In my ongoing recovery, i take an inventory. It often reminds me of how temporary everything is and to be mindful of what is, is not important.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
25th Sep 2020 3:26am
Dear BK,
“ that hope is the evilest
temptation conceived
of by God ” LOLOLOLOL! The absolute best phrase ever!!!!!
Yeah, this whole aging thing...you’ve nailed. Fab-tastic!
H🌷
“ that hope is the evilest
temptation conceived
of by God ” LOLOLOLOL! The absolute best phrase ever!!!!!
Yeah, this whole aging thing...you’ve nailed. Fab-tastic!
H🌷
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
25th Sep 2020 5:00am
Thank you Honoria. I don't like getting old very much. Hope you are well.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. thoughts on aging
26th Sep 2020 7:40pm
The imagery in this is wonderful despite the hollow spaces between words. I can feel the emotion in this very much, Kitts.
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
26th Sep 2020 8:22pm
I don't know about you my friend, but this while aging thing stinks.
Thank you for the kind words.
(P.S. the hollow spaces are symbolic for the lost years).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the kind words.
(P.S. the hollow spaces are symbolic for the lost years).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re: Re. thoughts on aging
26th Sep 2020 8:25pm
Not sure what age you are, Kitts, but I am just shy of 61, so am right with you on the aging aspect. Ironically, though, to be honest, I have never been happier. Or, maybe contented is the more appropriate word. Or, at peace.
Regardless, I get the age thingie.
Regardless, I get the age thingie.
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Re: Re. thoughts on aging
26th Sep 2020 8:35pm
Re: Re. thoughts on aging
26th Sep 2020 8:37pm
I'm kinda looking forward to retirement myself! Well, full retirement; I am alreayd partially retired. . .
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