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The perfect 10

What would happen if I saw her one day;
I would invite her in for their was something I had to say. 
Your hair is beautiful like a waterfall;
For her to be in nature after all. 

You eyes remind me of a cloud that I once saw;
It was a big fluffy heart shape that left me in awe. 
Your face is a fancy as a rose made from lace;
One of a kind that can't be replaced. 

Your curve of your neck, and shoulders remind me of heavens arch;
Only the angels that can touch as they march. 
Your breast as ample and firm as the forbidden fruit;
For they are ones I feel that their can't be a substitute. 

Your outline is as perfect as the hour glass of time;
To be this perfect should almost be a crime. 
Your legs are long and not like an elf;
They go all the way up, and make an ass out of them self. 

Your hands so soft as a newborns skin;
To have that natural silk should be a sin. 
Your heart that beats the life you keep;
I have heard it a thousand times as you sleep. 

Your mind; not sharp, or full of wit;
This is when it turn to shit!
You have played me as if I was a fool;
You've been like this since high school. 

I thought we were really great to me;
Only to realize you were really a friendemy. 
You took my love and a abused what I had;
I was a lot, and not just a tad. 

You used me to feel your need;
If I needed your help; you would've watched me bleed. 
I was always there to pick you up when you fell;
Then after all of I done; you put me in this hell. 

I should have read the book before seeing the cover;
Then all of this I would have uncover. 
Next I felt your heart to stone;
Your beauty was only skin deep, but
Your ugly to the bone. 

Yes, I know we all have are flaws;
It was always when you wanted something I would get calls.
No; no need to for you to apologize;
Only your beauty was your disguise.

So if your ever looking for the perfect ten;
Take your time; read the book from beginning to end. 


Note: this story is true. The names have not been listed to protect the innocent. Innocent my ass we all have had one of these people at one time in our life!
Written by Atropabelladonna (Atro)
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