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~(y)our ambre love above all & nil..
1.
~the accompanist
your
husky monotones’
a shadowy dark
semblance, a fallen
dusk’s uninvited
accompanist...
-overrides
those blinding synthetic
ultraviolet spectacle
-elongates
in a menacing acuity
yet intertwining
with its objective origin’s
free endless hands...
the extreme
‘8” connectivity
-our
cyclical looping
infinity
2.
~liberation
the koel…
no more
sings in its aching
melancholic grace...
..given to arduous
lovelorn rattles
pitch~ black leachates
of its darkening hues…
corrode inner in a
choking necrosis
famishing eyes
of one devotion…
in no tears, anymore
a fasting desiccation
Published 16th Sep 2020
Author's Note
#80 #ERULGCT . Robonoid x
a lil two minimalist poems of a darkness towards light & love ev.
non-Entries for RobUma Comp. THe 'Dark' Minimalist, exact 40 words each:)
Hope to see more & more your fab minimalist posts in the comp. Thanks & Best !:) x
*Had attached a YouTube link of Spoken Poetry ...from Personal Poetry Podcast...juz a humble beginning ..for us all to explore ..Light & Love xx
a lil two minimalist poems of a darkness towards light & love ev.
non-Entries for RobUma Comp. THe 'Dark' Minimalist, exact 40 words each:)
Hope to see more & more your fab minimalist posts in the comp. Thanks & Best !:) x
*Had attached a YouTube link of Spoken Poetry ...from Personal Poetry Podcast...juz a humble beginning ..for us all to explore ..Light & Love xx
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16th Sep 2020 10:25pm
I adored your reading, Uma! It adds an entirely different dimention to your poetry! I'm going to be listening to this one again and again. You should really do more readings! I love the Indian accent. It's so ancient, and yet still exists.
The two verses are just beautiful and so entwined. Much enjoyed, my Dear Friend.
The two verses are just beautiful and so entwined. Much enjoyed, my Dear Friend.
16th Sep 2020 10:46pm
Gorgeous writing, Uma... I can't listen to the reading yet because it is storming here and the internet is being wish-washy, but I look forward to hearing it ❤️
Keep up the great writing!
Keep up the great writing!
16th Sep 2020 11:09pm
Wow! Such a powerful poem...darkness emerging from that infinite crack...and so beautifully read uma.
🙏 Harry
🙏 Harry
16th Sep 2020 11:50pm
17th Sep 2020 00:03am
Incredible penning Uma👏🤯 again I must say you're a master poetess
And your voice is so beautiful and mesmerizing! I enjoyed this very much absolutely divine piece here love it!!!❤️👏🙌
And your voice is so beautiful and mesmerizing! I enjoyed this very much absolutely divine piece here love it!!!❤️👏🙌
17th Sep 2020 3:17am
I love how you put this to such a groovy background track! lol The first section brings to mind this overarching presence. Like a great hand of shadow and light that draws you into it's warm embrace and, through it, you find your connection to everything. The second stanza seems like the other end of the spectrum to me. The bird falls silent as darkness encroaches. It seems like a very yin yang journey of the soul. Always a fulfilling experience to read you Uma and feel soul resonance.
17th Sep 2020 5:24am
Perfectly balanced, an absolute joy to read and your warmth and depth of emotion were consistently on display. Beautiful 💜.
17th Sep 2020 3:27pm
A silk sunrise has just peeled the leaves from my rusty morning tree. That is not a euphemism ;) Delightful. I know you recorded many podcasts over the years, you definitely need to expand! Love me xx
Jazz sipped from a crystal goblet
Held up to tender lips, by calloused hands
Held up to tender lips, by calloused hands
