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Offer It Up

Yes, you're overrated and you know you hate it.
There's only one thing that could set you free.
So bring your troubles, bring them to me.

Offer it up as a willing sacrifice.
Offer it up if you're willing to pay the price.
So offer it up, and a piece of good advice.
Offer it up to be pleasing in the Father's eyes.

Does it drive you crazy or is it amazing how the love I send to you is true?
So is it befriending or is it offending?
I love you far too much to do that to you.

Offer it up as a willing sacrifice.
Offer it up if you're willing to pay the price.
So offer it up, and a piece of good advice.
Offer it up to be pleasing in the Father's eyes.

It's time to go when heaven calls.
Just like Jericho had seven walls.
When we shout, the city falls.
We're rid of doubt and that is all.

There's only one thing that ain't in pieces.
There's only one name; the name of Jesus.

Offer it up as a willing sacrifice.
Offer it up if you're willing to pay the price.
So offer it up, and a piece of good advice.
Offer it all to be pleasing in the Father's eyes.

Pleasing to the Father's eyes.
Written by Madcinder
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Author's Note
I still think this one is passable, despite its age. I do think I've done far better on this subject since I wrote this, but I have a soft spot for this, albeit cringy, but heartfelt song.
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