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Still
Still read your poems
and feel your heart
still found
so lovely your spirit within words
still here waiting for your presence
still want to love you always
and feel your heart
still found
so lovely your spirit within words
still here waiting for your presence
still want to love you always
Published 20th Aug 2020
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20th Aug 2020 3:11pm
21st Aug 2020 11:56am
Thank you Lawrence for the read and feedback. Hope everything is going well with you.
21st Aug 2020 5:18pm
I watched a feather drift down from a hummingbird and hurried outside to retrieve it...I keep it in a special place...as I do your words...thanks Jasmine
23rd Aug 2020 4:14am
22nd Aug 2020 5:29am
Dear RJ,
Beautiful and gentle in thought and voice. This piece feels for me like an omnipotent presence just waiting for us to walk in and grab a hug. Beautiful write. H🌷
Beautiful and gentle in thought and voice. This piece feels for me like an omnipotent presence just waiting for us to walk in and grab a hug. Beautiful write. H🌷
23rd Aug 2020 4:24am
Dear H,
Thank you for the read and feedback. I love the ideas of omnipotent presence, for me, it's God or Mother Nature.
I am so glad to have your support.
Jasmine
Thank you for the read and feedback. I love the ideas of omnipotent presence, for me, it's God or Mother Nature.
I am so glad to have your support.
Jasmine
Anonymous
30th Aug 2020 00:36am
Nice ink..
Dave
Dave
30th Aug 2020 5:28am
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