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Into The Ether
What is grief?
To me it's a long goodbye
and to others a way of life,
no two people bare it the same
yet every human has felt this pain
unless were talking about
sociopaths, they don't feel,
anything.
To me it's a long goodbye
and to others a way of life,
no two people bare it the same
yet every human has felt this pain
unless were talking about
sociopaths, they don't feel,
anything.
Published 4th Aug 2020
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4th Aug 2020 3:20am
Grief can be without end... one never knows.... sharing lessens the burden.. the weight of the cross was shared! Sociopaths feel, they feel the need for instant self gratification. Great write!💕
4th Aug 2020 4:19am
Dear N,
Grief. That soul sucking emotion that leaves one exhausted and dazed. It is singular and I suppose if we’re lucky gets easier to live with. Your poem has me reflecting on this human trait and how best to cope? A very intense subject with a lot of room for thought. I always enjoy your accompanying photos and this piece is no exception. I always appreciate your candor and right to the point writing style. H🌷
Grief. That soul sucking emotion that leaves one exhausted and dazed. It is singular and I suppose if we’re lucky gets easier to live with. Your poem has me reflecting on this human trait and how best to cope? A very intense subject with a lot of room for thought. I always enjoy your accompanying photos and this piece is no exception. I always appreciate your candor and right to the point writing style. H🌷
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- Edited 4th Aug 2020 4:39am
4th Aug 2020 4:38am
me too
4th Aug 2020 1:25pm
No; they don't, Nikki. I truly felt the heaviness in this from your Spirit. Here are to brighter days and gentler energy. xo
4th Aug 2020 3:48pm
Ahh ... Yes ... Always better to let the worst bleed back to the ether ... When one can ... Bless and love ... ..
24th Sep 2020 7:32pm
I fully undesrtand...........and still feel (some) of the pain of decades ago............(A result of my own stupidity. Regards, Robert.
