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Love story
Looking into his eyes
They are reflections of the sky
Drowning me in a whirlpool
Of wants, needs and desires
I stare into them and fly
In a phantasmagoric world
The core of me in exquisite
pain and ache of needs
I walk into his arms
And lost my soul within
He has become my all
He is my world
I have come home
His heart is my sky
His love my ground
I love him with all my strength
He melts into me
And we become one
A oneness, a togetherness
The mating of body and soul
Flying towards the sky
Bursting in confetti of colours
And floating down in blissful
Satisfaction…
The moments have passed
And here I sit
In an empty theatre
I wait here still
For replay of the same
Old movie in aged projectors
In my mind’s eyes,
I seek encores
of lovers loving scenes
I sit here still
Silence complete.
They are reflections of the sky
Drowning me in a whirlpool
Of wants, needs and desires
I stare into them and fly
In a phantasmagoric world
The core of me in exquisite
pain and ache of needs
I walk into his arms
And lost my soul within
He has become my all
He is my world
I have come home
His heart is my sky
His love my ground
I love him with all my strength
He melts into me
And we become one
A oneness, a togetherness
The mating of body and soul
Flying towards the sky
Bursting in confetti of colours
And floating down in blissful
Satisfaction…
The moments have passed
And here I sit
In an empty theatre
I wait here still
For replay of the same
Old movie in aged projectors
In my mind’s eyes,
I seek encores
of lovers loving scenes
I sit here still
Silence complete.
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22nd Jan 2012 11:11pm
Love it....
22nd Jan 2012 11:20pm
when you feel down & out
when the memories make you pout
when the past is remembered by your frame
when your voice can only say 1 name
when you feel another moment approaching near
you gotta just Love it & be sincere....;)
when the memories make you pout
when the past is remembered by your frame
when your voice can only say 1 name
when you feel another moment approaching near
you gotta just Love it & be sincere....;)
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re: Love it....
22nd Jan 2012 11:36pm
Moving on, Goodest. Yes. and thank you for dropping by and commenting. You are kind.
Grace
22nd Jan 2012 11:25pm
love is an emotional that can bring out your best memories and also you worst pains.
Your ending, silence complete...deep
Your ending, silence complete...deep
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re: Grace
22nd Jan 2012 11:38pm
Dear Kym. Yes, it is isnt it. Sometimes one wish that it could be surgically removed. Haha, not funny. Anyway, thanks so much for being here, reading and commenting.
hmm
22nd Jan 2012 11:35pm
re: hmm
22nd Jan 2012 11:39pm
Whoa
23rd Jan 2012 2:38am
I had to go back and re-read it. You have solicited two emotions from me in a matter of seconds. My second read revealed euphoric finding of love and then a let down of waiting and false promises. Wow! That side-swiped me. Love it! Did I draw the correct conclusion of the meaning of your poem sister?
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re: Whoa
23rd Jan 2012 1:30pm
Yes my dear JstMskaye; you saw it as I wrote it. Thank you so much. Also for dropping by, reading and commenting.
That..
23rd Jan 2012 8:12am
re: That..
23rd Jan 2012 1:32pm
I wish inspirations were not born of these. But do we have a choice. Do I? MrAlptraum,thank you for dropping by, reading and commenting.
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re: phantasmagoric world
23rd Jan 2012 1:33pm
My dear Veliqua: If only. Happy endings: a gallop towards the sunset...life is not full of these. Thank you for reading and commenting.
re: I LIKE IT
24th Jan 2012 1:09pm