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Temple

Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 11th Jul 2020
| Edited 23rd Jul 2020
Author's Note
2nd Place, Admin's Manipulation Comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11485/
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comments 28
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Re. Temple
11th Jul 2020 4:56pm
Truth is always central to our thoughts. We always know it but sometimes don’t acknowledge it. Great write!🌹
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2020 5:18pm
I'm lovin the font, and the colors ( not even going to attempt to name any of them though lol ). It's very high energy, and also visually gives the impression of a "tuning in".
Winner, winner!
❤📝💻📷
Winner, winner!
❤📝💻📷

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Re: Re. Temple
17th Jul 2020 1:42am
lolol @ the colors! Don't know about 'Winner,
', but I do appreciate you thinking such. Thank you. ❤📝
', but I do appreciate you thinking such. Thank you. ❤📝
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Re: Re. Temple
16th Jul 2020 10:40pm
Re. Temple
12th Jul 2020 00:50am
Dear A,
Any possibility I could purchase this state of purity?
My laziness aside, your poem describes such a wonderfully beautiful state of being I can recall only experiencing once, when I became an aunt. The feeling of love was so exhilarating I truly felt I was walking on clouds. Your poem made me recall those feelings and it was such a happy time. Beautiful write.
H🌷
Any possibility I could purchase this state of purity?
My laziness aside, your poem describes such a wonderfully beautiful state of being I can recall only experiencing once, when I became an aunt. The feeling of love was so exhilarating I truly felt I was walking on clouds. Your poem made me recall those feelings and it was such a happy time. Beautiful write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Temple
16th Jul 2020 10:42pm
I am happy this related to you in such a wonderful way, Honoria. There is a love so pure it expects nothing in return; it's just happy to give. It's very liberating from the weight of ego.
Thank you always for such lovely comments. xo
Thank you always for such lovely comments. xo
Re. Temple
12th Jul 2020 9:23pm
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16th Jul 2020 10:42pm
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16th Jul 2020 10:55pm
Anonymous
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Re: Re. Temple
16th Jul 2020 10:42pm
Re. Temple
18th Jul 2020 6:13am
Wonderful. You took an approach that is truly symbiotic and crafted an outstanding piece.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
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18th Jul 2020 2:53pm
Re. Temple
19th Jul 2020 5:52pm
I missed a lot of your posts. This is truly beautiful dear Ahavati. I surrender to love. 🌹❤
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Re: Re. Temple
19th Jul 2020 6:00pm
Re. Temple
This expresses a life s wisdom, much like alot of Maya Angelous sayings. It also has a 'habits of succesful people' feeling, like advice that is honestly given to those who search. The difficult balance is hard to attain, but easy to maintain once attained; there is a long journey to reach the temple, but once there, you won't want to leave..
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Re: Re. Temple
20th Jul 2020 2:23pm
Amen, PR. A perfect response as I've ever read about balance and attainment. Thank you; it's truly appreciated. xo
Re. Temple
2nd Aug 2020 2:13pm
Wow! Beautiful peace here about .....peace :) Love it. You are really in tune spiritually. Can already tell and I just started reading you. I used to be big into meditation. I'm very spiritual myself. I'm trying to get back into meditating but find it difficult with my constantly racing mind. Love this
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Re: Re. Temple
2nd Aug 2020 2:30pm
Thank you, Michael. Sometimes guided meditation can assist you back on track if you're having difficulty reacclimating. Do you read Tarot or Oracle cards?
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2nd Aug 2020 2:36pm
Re: Re. Temple
2nd Aug 2020 2:38pm
Tarot is powerful. It will be interesting to observe your growth. I use oracle cards. I seem to be much more in tune with them than I was tarot.
Re: Re. Temple
2nd Aug 2020 2:38pm
I am a member of a Meetup Group, Spirituality and Wicca group. I am Wiccan.
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Re: Re. Temple
2nd Aug 2020 2:41pm
Groups of like-minded certainly promote spiritual energy. I am no one thing and yet a part of everything; I take what nurtures my spirit, and leave behind what doesn't. There is plenty of both to be found everywhere.
I wish you well on your journey.
I wish you well on your journey.