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Follow your dreams (see note)
Crossroads, stations, night perons
On this journey through life
I know you because you are like me
Without love you cannot be happy
and without dreams the light dies
It's hard to get to the stars,
but I know you can if you try
I believe everything is possible
If you only pretend to be happy
you are giving up on happiness
Somehow we met along the way
So that I can give you this message
Remember your dreams
Please stay with me when I say,
do not abandon your dreams
Follow me and see what you can be
A person needs more than a routine
Dissolve my hope for you into yourself
Because I see what you can be
If you follow your dreams
You and I are so much alike
Honey and tea with blueberries
But under the wrapper there is
a lot more to the story
Scars, anxiety, pain, sadness,
and doubts
Where did the dreams go?
Don't give up on happiness
You say everyone knows what you
should do. I say,
please do not abandon your dreams
I know you can shine so bright
And even in most difficult times
And during the saddest hour
May this strong light not leave you
You will not break
You will not be hardened
I just want to help you remember,
you are beautiful!
Hold my hand and don't forget
Across the oceans and cities
You know I have nothing to gain
So I hope you see the purity in this
message. Your heart is a reward
And I need to say this to you,
You are so beautiful
People like you are beautiful
Let every impulse of love,
Reflect back to you again double
Let this heartfelt light comfort
and heal, multiplied many times
On this journey through life
I know you because you are like me
Without love you cannot be happy
and without dreams the light dies
It's hard to get to the stars,
but I know you can if you try
I believe everything is possible
If you only pretend to be happy
you are giving up on happiness
Somehow we met along the way
So that I can give you this message
Remember your dreams
Please stay with me when I say,
do not abandon your dreams
Follow me and see what you can be
A person needs more than a routine
Dissolve my hope for you into yourself
Because I see what you can be
If you follow your dreams
You and I are so much alike
Honey and tea with blueberries
But under the wrapper there is
a lot more to the story
Scars, anxiety, pain, sadness,
and doubts
Where did the dreams go?
Don't give up on happiness
You say everyone knows what you
should do. I say,
please do not abandon your dreams
I know you can shine so bright
And even in most difficult times
And during the saddest hour
May this strong light not leave you
You will not break
You will not be hardened
I just want to help you remember,
you are beautiful!
Hold my hand and don't forget
Across the oceans and cities
You know I have nothing to gain
So I hope you see the purity in this
message. Your heart is a reward
And I need to say this to you,
You are so beautiful
People like you are beautiful
Let every impulse of love,
Reflect back to you again double
Let this heartfelt light comfort
and heal, multiplied many times
Author's Note
This was inspired by someone that I feel needed to hear this message but there are many beautiful people here and parts of this are definitely meant for you, at the very least the last part. Also, the message is for anyone here who may need to hear it.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
You prove yourself a poor liar, "I am not a writer or poet" but that's alright, I prefer your telling of truths. Get well written my friend.
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 00:18am
Thanks Aj. I am always anxious when I post something and you have really helped me feel less so with your beautiful comment. 💖
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Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 00:31am
Dear Kristina, words cannot not describe how touched I am by this poem but tears may. I am inspired beyond comprehension . You not only recognize the beauty in others but you too teach them how to be beautiful to themselves and by the tiny beats of butterfly wings how to be beautiful to others
This passage is breathtaking in its compassion and genuine love and concern for another struggling with the vicissitudes of life.,
"Dissolve my hope for you into yourself
Because I see what you can be
If you follow your dreams"
I found this passage cute, humorous and very comforting, "You and I are so much alike
Honey and tea with blueberries"
My joy tank is full and runneth over❣❣ Thank you for sharing your beautifully composed message of hope and acceptance. 🙏🌹 Okay back to bed, Christmas morning's over. 😍
This passage is breathtaking in its compassion and genuine love and concern for another struggling with the vicissitudes of life.,
"Dissolve my hope for you into yourself
Because I see what you can be
If you follow your dreams"
I found this passage cute, humorous and very comforting, "You and I are so much alike
Honey and tea with blueberries"
My joy tank is full and runneth over❣❣ Thank you for sharing your beautifully composed message of hope and acceptance. 🙏🌹 Okay back to bed, Christmas morning's over. 😍
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 1:08am
Thanks GW for your beautiful comment and feedback. "tiny beats of butterfly wings how to be beautiful to others" I really love that. I love butterflies, which is one reason for the 'Peace in Hovering' I wrote. :) I am so very happy that you found inspiration in this. It is truly the greatest reward for me. 💖
Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 1:15am
I too love butterflies. The Monarch is my favorite. We used to go to Natural Bridges Bridges Beach in Santa Cruz, CA. to watch millions of monarchs flock there to rest on their long journey North. I miss that place. You are more awesome than churros con chocolate.😘
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 9:50pm
Millions, that sounds so beautiful. I could not possibly be more awesome than churros con chocolate. :)
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8th Jul 2020 1:03am
Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 8:52am
Dear K,
Stellar write. “I just want to help you remember,
you are beautiful! ” sometimes it’s really nice having someone point that out when we forget. I think the world is your gem stone, you offer so many jewels in your open loving writes your crown will be packed with shining love stones from all those you’ve helped so selflessly. Lovely write. H🌷
Stellar write. “I just want to help you remember,
you are beautiful! ” sometimes it’s really nice having someone point that out when we forget. I think the world is your gem stone, you offer so many jewels in your open loving writes your crown will be packed with shining love stones from all those you’ve helped so selflessly. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 9:34pm
I am at a loss for words again. You say the sweetest things. There can be no doubt that your heart is a reward and you are beautiful. I hope you hear and feel it everyday because you should.
Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 9:33pm
hullo
appears to be an s missing from a word somewhere in the first two stanzas. best of luck finding it :)'
great vibe, conveyed well in its purity
good stuff
appears to be an s missing from a word somewhere in the first two stanzas. best of luck finding it :)'
great vibe, conveyed well in its purity
good stuff
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
8th Jul 2020 9:44pm
I think you are pulling my leg because I only know of an extra s and that was on purpose. I do not see a missing s. so there...
Thank you for commenting 💖 but you better tell me what you are talking about with the s because it is going to drive me crazy and you don't want to see that.
Thank you for commenting 💖 but you better tell me what you are talking about with the s because it is going to drive me crazy and you don't want to see that.
Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
9th Jul 2020 1:19am
I came back to read this one a second tome. I really appreciate how persistent you are in support of the person who needed to hear this message. We should all bombard each other with affirmation, as you have here. We all need to hear it from tome to time.
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
9th Jul 2020 12:00pm
Thanks RPM1on1, yes, I think we all need more positive support which is one reason I posted here. Thanks for commenting and I appreciate your feedback and thoughts. 💖
Follow your dreams (see note)
Hi, Kris
A heart so generous it creates a genuine continuum between the giving of itself and the receiving by others of what it gives: that's what I see. This is equivalent to a sacrifice, in which the living dies to self so that the dead may live. The operative line for me is "Dissolve my hope for you into yourself." Therein lies the continuum, which fulfills the 1st Great Commission, to live that others may live.
Your tranquil pace is one of reassurance for the lost. The recurrence of the "dream" motif gives power to the principal theme, while the "you are like me" motif pulls the reader in and makes the dream believable.
As long as you have deliberately used the term "peron" (an enlisted officer who serves in an army), then there is no missing "s" as in "person."
Sincerely
cab
A heart so generous it creates a genuine continuum between the giving of itself and the receiving by others of what it gives: that's what I see. This is equivalent to a sacrifice, in which the living dies to self so that the dead may live. The operative line for me is "Dissolve my hope for you into yourself." Therein lies the continuum, which fulfills the 1st Great Commission, to live that others may live.
Your tranquil pace is one of reassurance for the lost. The recurrence of the "dream" motif gives power to the principal theme, while the "you are like me" motif pulls the reader in and makes the dream believable.
As long as you have deliberately used the term "peron" (an enlisted officer who serves in an army), then there is no missing "s" as in "person."
Sincerely
cab
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Re: Follow your dreams (see note)
I truly love reading your comments because they have great depth and are beautifully poetic in their own right. Thank you for taking the time to give such wonderful feedback. 💖
So I am sure I messed up a little on the use of the word peron. But let me try to set it straight, I have a Polish friend in the UK who always called the train platform peron. I really liked that word but I think simply adding an s to the end is not the correct plural form and so that probably ensured it would not be properly understood and I probably should have just used train platform. I was envisioning the platforms at night because I always loved the stations at night. I guess I just used the word out of nostalgia. I know forms of peron occur in many languages but I think ultimately they all track back to French. Anyway, therein lies the mystery of the perons. lol and adding train platforms, platforms at night etc would mess up the length of the first line
So I am sure I messed up a little on the use of the word peron. But let me try to set it straight, I have a Polish friend in the UK who always called the train platform peron. I really liked that word but I think simply adding an s to the end is not the correct plural form and so that probably ensured it would not be properly understood and I probably should have just used train platform. I was envisioning the platforms at night because I always loved the stations at night. I guess I just used the word out of nostalgia. I know forms of peron occur in many languages but I think ultimately they all track back to French. Anyway, therein lies the mystery of the perons. lol and adding train platforms, platforms at night etc would mess up the length of the first line
Re: Follow your dreams (see note)
9th Jul 2020 10:41pm
I stand, correctified. please accept my humble opols, hopefully my comment didnt take away from the overall brilliance of your work.
*hat tip*
*hat tip*
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Re: Follow your dreams (see note)
9th Jul 2020 11:25pm
Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
14th Jul 2020 5:40pm
It's a great reminder to let that person(s) know they are appreciated and loved. I liked the "Don't abandon your dreams" lines repeated a couple of times, almost subliminally so that people are inspired to continue and not give up.
Excellent write.
Excellent write.
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
14th Jul 2020 9:45pm
Thanks a lot wallyroo, sometimes things need to be repeated to sink in. :) I am really glad you liked it. ❤️
Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
7th Mar 2021 3:22pm
it reads like a mother talking to daughter whom just lost her lover do not give up love not lost just misplace.
well done
well done
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Re: Re. Follow your dreams (see note)
7th Mar 2021 5:09pm
Now that you mention it I can see that. :) I like the 'do not give up love not lost just misplaced' that's a great message. I know this one is different and I am really happy you liked it. 💖