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Bird Song
Take flight
little bird
Go to
the place
where you
sing
the tune
so sweet
and pure
I hear
your
beautiful
Song
little bird
Go to
the place
where you
sing
the tune
so sweet
and pure
I hear
your
beautiful
Song
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5th Jul 2020 1:55am
This spill immediately showers positive energies
Love the litho (or painting)
and ideal for what has been spilled
Love the litho (or painting)
and ideal for what has been spilled
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Anonymous
5th Jul 2020 3:27am
Hey Baw.......gorgeous pic.......your words are stunning to the soul......beautiful words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Jul 2020 7:11am
Bird Song
This is beautiful, Bawaga!
Your minimalism forces the reader to wonder about that which has not been stated -- in fact, to bring his/her own imagination into play.
What a lovely picture to help you state your point! Obviously, the birds are now at the place they go to sing; you're in for a treat.
Many of my own poems are [something]song; therefore, yours immediately caught my attention.
Sincerely
cab
Your minimalism forces the reader to wonder about that which has not been stated -- in fact, to bring his/her own imagination into play.
What a lovely picture to help you state your point! Obviously, the birds are now at the place they go to sing; you're in for a treat.
Many of my own poems are [something]song; therefore, yours immediately caught my attention.
Sincerely
cab
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Re: Bird Song
5th Jul 2020 7:14am
Thanks Cab I also thought this picture was perfect. Imagination is a wonderful thing.
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5th Jul 2020 10:39am
Re. Bird Song
5th Jul 2020 11:13am
Beautiful imagery and a delightfully simplistic yearning for freedom.
You have truly captured one of the simple pleasures of nature with this piece of work.
You know how to make me smile Bawaga
You have truly captured one of the simple pleasures of nature with this piece of work.
You know how to make me smile Bawaga
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5th Jul 2020 11:19am