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Immortal
The lines will never cross and I will never die,
as painful as it is there's truth in every lie
First and everlasting forever is my curse,
I spend all eternity preparing for the worst
Nothing really matters no emotions ever show,
everyone i let in always has to go
Everyday is pointless and cycles on repeat,
life is just an enemy that I can not defeat
as painful as it is there's truth in every lie
First and everlasting forever is my curse,
I spend all eternity preparing for the worst
Nothing really matters no emotions ever show,
everyone i let in always has to go
Everyday is pointless and cycles on repeat,
life is just an enemy that I can not defeat
Published 2nd Jul 2020
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2nd Jul 2020 2:34pm
Hey atkfrostyatk,
This is an excellent self reflection... Very expressive writing. I deal with depression as well, so I feel like I understand where you are coming from with this one. It's well written, and flows very well :)
Welcome to DUP by the way!
This is an excellent self reflection... Very expressive writing. I deal with depression as well, so I feel like I understand where you are coming from with this one. It's well written, and flows very well :)
Welcome to DUP by the way!
2nd Jul 2020 4:41pm
2nd Jul 2020 3:48pm
this line: " everyone i let in always has to go "
could be the mantra of every introvert struggling with everything from depression, loneliness to meeting new people!
Loved the tempo to Your reflective spill
could be the mantra of every introvert struggling with everything from depression, loneliness to meeting new people!
Loved the tempo to Your reflective spill
2nd Jul 2020 4:34pm
Hey i want you to know that that means a lot to me this is a poem that just flowed out of me i didn't even consider anyone would feel the same way
2nd Jul 2020 6:23pm
You will discover that the more You reciprocate
in Reading and being Read
that much of what we spill is very relatable.
: )
in Reading and being Read
that much of what we spill is very relatable.
: )
3rd Jul 2020 3:05pm
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